Reviewer: Xxkrisy410xX
Date: 07/03/07 13:59
Chapter: Beginnings

I LOVE your story!!! please review SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: BellaLuna007
Date: 06/26/07 17:52
Chapter: Beginnings

I absolutely, totally, completely ADORE this story. Really. I do. You write Snape and Hermione very well. It's great! Keep it up!

Author's Response: so glad you think so! thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: starfighterpilot
Date: 06/20/07 14:17
Chapter: Beginnings

This story is brilliant! Keep up the good work-please I can't wait to see what happens next!! =]

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: double_deuce
Date: 05/31/07 20:25
Chapter: Beginnings

I'll keep it short in case anyone else steals it. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR BRILLIANT WRITING NEVER CHANGE BABY!!!!!

Author's Response: You're my favourite person. Ever. :D

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 05/31/07 14:06
Chapter: Beginnings

Not bad. Hermione is definately going overboard on the dramatics though.

Author's Response: lol, i probably would too xD

Reviewer: Akasha Snape
Date: 04/19/07 6:59
Chapter: Beginnings

Of course I like it, a lot, can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: JFig
Date: 02/28/07 14:49
Chapter: Beginnings

I. Love. Your. Writing! Seriously, your vocabulary and your style and your humor..


Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: DumbledoresGirl4ever
Date: 02/11/07 14:21
Chapter: Beginnings

Hmmm.... interesting! I'm enjoying this!

Author's Response: .

Reviewer: sdemelo
Date: 02/06/07 6:50
Chapter: Beginnings

Haha! Yea, I know it's a little demanding of me, but there are other excellent stories out there where the two characters don't end up together at the end. It always makes me sad... :( I look forward to your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's on it's way :D

Reviewer: sdemelo
Date: 02/05/07 15:16
Chapter: Beginnings

I definitely echo those who have responded to the in character portrayals of Hermione and Snape. It's so fun to see them snipe at eachother... especially if maybe... maybe.. they'll get together eventually. (please!!) That's the best kind of story, really. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: omg what kind of romance fic do you think this is? you actually want the two main characters to get together?? gosh you are so demanding....but ah, what the hell. you're review was so nice that i just might oblige :D

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 01/14/07 14:42
Chapter: Beginnings

haha, wonderful.

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 12/09/06 21:45
Chapter: Beginnings

Wow. I really appreciate your characterization of Snape. I feel as though you've channeled JKR here.

This is him, in his pure venomous form, without any fluffiness, or simplicity of character.

I absolutely love your passage of thoughts. He respects her talent - but the utter venom with which he does so makes him IC.

He teaches Hermione, but his reasons for doing so - to hear her stop talking, and to make fun of her mistakes - are utterly Snape-like.

His venomous comments like "Almost will get you nowhere," are totally what we see in the classroom in canon.

The fact that he does potions for free shows his love for the art, but the deal with the Ministry shows his Slytherin ambition and love for power (aka money).

The only thing - I can't see Snape scrawling on tests. He's a precise man - he would have an elegant script - print, not cursive, IMO. Handwriting can tell a lot about a character, and Snape would NOT scrawl. -reviewer is slightly OCD, sorry-

Also, Fs aren't given in the magical would be given a T for Troll if you were failing. ;)

Awesome job with characterization of Snape. He's all angles, hard edges - it's perfect.


P.S. But if you haven't already, you must put an AU warning in this story. It disregards the events of the sixth book. -refuses to say more lest some have not read book six yet-

Author's Response: Ah you are my favorite kind of reviewer! I love all of your thoughtful comments, and most especially, the little things that I missed and can now quite ashamedly go and fix xD thank you so much for your time and kind words!!!

Reviewer: Cerydden M_layne
Date: 11/03/06 2:20
Chapter: Beginnings

OK, add me to the list of people who want to know what happens next. I really like it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad you did. and i know it's frustrating when authors refuse to update, but i just have so much going on right now. but i do eventually plan to continue. thanks for the support! :)

Reviewer: esclave
Date: 08/08/06 6:43
Chapter: Beginnings

Can't wait to see where this is going, it's great so far!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: kakagurl
Date: 08/06/06 21:37
Chapter: Beginnings

more more i want more

Author's Response: lol okay! as soon as i can get the second chapter beta'd :D and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 08/05/06 0:30
Chapter: Beginnings

I've added this to my favorites and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: yay! that totally just made my day to hear that! thanks for the review and the fav :D

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 08/04/06 10:32
Chapter: Beginnings

This is great! I haven't read one where she's trying not to be attracted to him before- good work!!!

Author's Response: lol thanks for the review!

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