Reviews For Perfect
Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/03/06 7:39
Chapter: Jealousy

Oh, so romantic. I love it, it's beautiful, well done. I love the complicated-ness of it, it's just written so well. congrats, 100000/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 09/03/06 7:39
Chapter: Jealousy

Oh, so romantic. I love it, it's beautiful, well done. I love the complicated-ness of it, it's just written so well. congrats, 100000/10

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 09/01/06 11:03
Chapter: Jealousy

This is sooooooo good!!!! I love the last scene with Lily and James, and I especially love the last paragraph. "If nothing else, Lily would be strong" . . . all the way to . . . "wishing it was all different"
Perfect has been on my favourites list for a while so I could be notified IMMEDIATELY when it was updated, but it's been way over a month!!!
PLEASE update , for your poor readers sake.
The ones who hang on to every word you say and desperately don't want them to stop.


Author's Response: Ahh! I'm sorry. The submitted the chapter, but it disappeared and I don't know if it was rejected or what. I'll re-enter it this weekend though!

Reviewer: roman_soldier
Date: 08/28/06 22:40
Chapter: Jealousy

Very cute. What a problem! Of course, who wouldn't want to marry James Potter?

Author's Response: I certainly wouldn't turn him away.

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 08/22/06 19:04
Chapter: Jealousy

What happened to that second chapter? I saw it was in queque, and now it's not. Please try to send it back in. I really like this story.

Author's Response: I don't know...scurries off to find the problem.

Reviewer: madmaddie1415
Date: 08/21/06 20:09
Chapter: Jealousy

ahhhh no i like freaked out when i clicked on it and only this part came up and couldnt even like look to see if the other one was accepted and i instant messaged my friend and started taking out all my anger on her and everything thing so yeah im babbling and stuff... so yeah i re-read it and i cried again so yeah great job!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: POTCgirl1337
Date: 08/20/06 11:36
Chapter: Jealousy

That is so sad! I love the way that you explained how she is feeling and how you make us understand without just stating the facts.
Keep up the great work, can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is submitted, hopefully it'll be up soon!

Reviewer: blue sapphire lady
Date: 08/11/06 16:03
Chapter: Jealousy

awwwwww! it's so sad! you've written an amazing story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: madmaddie1415
Date: 08/07/06 19:48
Chapter: Jealousy

please please pleeeease update

Author's Response: I'm going to enter the last chapter either tonight or tomorrow. I'm so glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: Zily
Date: 08/04/06 22:49
Chapter: Jealousy

great story. poor lily just now realizing her true feelings.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 08/04/06 12:43
Chapter: Jealousy

I dunno what to write!!! So sad!!!! Im all teary. Well written!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 08/03/06 13:07
Chapter: Jealousy

Okay, this is now on my favorite list. Please, put that next chapter up SOON! I really want to know what's next.

Author's Response: Hehe, I will!

Author's Response: Hehe.

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 08/03/06 2:25
Chapter: Jealousy

i loved it! oh, it was so sad. goodness, mirabelle sounds like a piece of work. personally i can never stand people who seem perfect. but it was a really, really great story. you should write a sequel!

Author's Response: That you!

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 08/03/06 2:04
Chapter: Jealousy

update soon plz

Author's Response: Okay.

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 08/03/06 0:42
Chapter: Jealousy

wow. This story is SO GOOD!
I have just added you to my favourites.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
And I know that EVERYBODY says this, but please update!


Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 08/02/06 19:04
Chapter: Jealousy

Ohhhh. That made me cry... That is sooo sad!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry to have made you cry. :D

Reviewer: madmaddie1415
Date: 08/02/06 18:56
Chapter: Jealousy

this made me cry..that dosnt take much but its so sweet update pleaseeee I LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/02/06 16:15
Chapter: Jealousy

MOOORE!

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/02/06 16:15
Chapter: Jealousy

MOOORE!

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 08/02/06 14:02
Chapter: Jealousy

Oh how smart.( on both parts oh and heavy sarcasm in those last three words.) I Like it so far.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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