Reviews For Perfect
Reviewer: avantikapotter
Date: 01/27/07 4:30
Chapter: Smitten


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 01/24/07 15:42
Chapter: Smitten

wow that was amazing really really good:)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 01/19/07 14:24
Chapter: Jealousy


Author's Response: Just wait!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter
Date: 12/14/06 19:40
Chapter: Smitten


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 11/26/06 15:38
Chapter: Smitten

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Your a great writer. In the first chapter I cryed no seriously its great you should write some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 11/24/06 22:56
Chapter: Smitten

Ohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!! loved it!!!!!! 1000000000000/10 it was romantic and soooooooooo cute!!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, Abbi!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 11/22/06 20:25
Chapter: Smitten

I loved htis story! It's amazing! The end was really good. I liked hte flashback to their first kiss. Perfect.

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 11/22/06 17:56
Chapter: Smitten

sigh. Very satisfying ending. I LOVED this story. It is brilliant. Incredible job. I loved the "perfect" thread all through the story. Favourite line in this chapter: "I want to congratulate these two amazing, very blessed people; 'Big-headed James Bloody Potter’ in Lily’s words and ‘Stubborn Lily Evans,’ in James’. You finally got her." Favourite over all: "If nothing else, Lily would be strong. She would not beg for someone to love her. For the first time in her life, Lily said exactly what she felt, she put everything out there, her heart on the line, and she was rejected. Lily would not let this tear her up, she would walk down the aisle on Sunday, chin up. And with that, Lily stood and walked towards the house, not looking back. James just stood there, somewhat numb, watching her figure walk away in the darkness. It always seemed that he was the weak one, the one who always got hurt. There was no doubt in James’ mind that she was hurt, but she was the one who walked back into the house, the one to move on. She was the one who always held the cards. He just stood outside, wishing it was all different."
This is one of my favourite stories . . . ever. I'm so glad you (finally) updated. The wait was long . . . but so worth it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: LVpotterlover
Date: 11/22/06 13:50
Chapter: Smitten

OMG, this was really good. I absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Molly Raesly
Date: 11/22/06 12:44
Chapter: Jealousy

that's so sad! oh my god! you made me sad. the next chapter better be happy cause i'm gonna cry. great story by the way. your writing is excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 11/22/06 12:08
Chapter: Smitten

You, my dear KASK, have talent. Pure, undeniable talent. This was by far one of the best James/Lily fics I have ever read. It was sweet, tender, and just...perfect. =P I loved this

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: meryal
Date: 11/22/06 11:22
Chapter: Smitten

Yay! I love how you tied it together, and ended with Sirius' toast! It's a great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: MarauderWannabe
Date: 11/13/06 16:54
Chapter: Jealousy

omg that was awesome! update soon! i love stories like this one, because there is suspense, but you know it will turn out ok

Author's Response: Will it? Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: adalittle
Date: 11/11/06 21:55
Chapter: Jealousy

um, wow, I was literally crying when I read this! *sniffs*

Author's Response: Aw! I'm glad it touched you!

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/29/06 16:09
Chapter: Jealousy

oh he's so STUPID!

Author's Response: ?

Reviewer: scarletwoman14
Date: 10/01/06 20:46
Chapter: Jealousy

ok im sorry to bother you again, but i must agree with Her_mi_o_ne 16 i'v gotten to the point where i check this page more than my myspace to see if its been updated and where i'v found myself making theorys on whats coming up next....part of me was even seriously contemplating making this my homepage in a nutshell you may just be the new JKR for me, or you have a truley amazing story on you hands ...yes it is that good

Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you! This made my day :D

Reviewer: Her_mi_o_ne 16
Date: 10/01/06 12:06
Chapter: Jealousy

I love the language of this story, the plot, the EVERYTHING.
I love this story!!!
PLEASE UPDATE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been on the edge of my seat for what seems like forever and I'm a little afraid I'm going to fall off soon!

Author's Response: Hahaha!

Reviewer: scarletwoman14
Date: 09/09/06 12:13
Chapter: Jealousy

oh my gosh i love this! please update soon, it was amazing!! your such a good writter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on getting it updated.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 09/07/06 20:01
Chapter: Jealousy

awwwww nooooooooo that's sad! But it'll be alright in the end. Right? Right? Hello?????

Author's Response: Hmmmm.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 09/07/06 20:01
Chapter: Jealousy

awwwww nooooooooo that's sad! But it'll be alright in the end. Right? Right? Hello?????

Author's Response: :D

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