Reviews For Perfect
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 05/19/12 17:26
Chapter: Smitten

perfect :)

Reviewer: 94Hippogriffs
Date: 01/24/10 21:22
Chapter: Smitten

Yay! I was sad when I read the first chapter, but it worked out in the end. good writing, by the way

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/07/08 9:59
Chapter: Smitten

Your story is perfect! I love it and enjoy reading it again and again.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 06/06/08 9:33
Chapter: Smitten

aww! so cute. nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 03/09/08 9:01
Chapter: Smitten

Oh my goah! I absolutly loe it! It was very well written, thought out, and it pulled on my heart strings.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dobbyXkreacher
Date: 01/24/08 17:48
Chapter: Jealousy

this story was soo good.. and the weirdest part is i had a dream almost exactly like ur story once!! i just read it and i had total deja vu. its weird. but u wrote it so much better than i ever could. great story!

Author's Response: Weird! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 01/01/08 12:29
Chapter: Smitten

It was full of passion, but it was gently. Should that be "gentle"?
I love this story...thank goodness Mirabelle was nice about it--though it seems a little unrealistic that she would take it so stoically. She should marry Aaron.
This is very well-written, one of my favorites of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'll go change that. This was one of the first fics on the site and I haven't looked at it in ages.

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 12/15/07 19:07
Chapter: Smitten

Again with the tears! The funny thing is that, as I was reading this chapter, the song 'We Belong Together' by Gavin DeGraw came on my music player and I thought it a bit ironic. This is one of my favorite James/Lily fics ever. I only wish it could go on forever. Please, never stop writing these wonderful stories.


Author's Response: I love Gavin DeGraw. :) I'm very glad that you like my stories. Thank you!

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 12/15/07 18:57
Chapter: Jealousy

AWWW! Teary eyes over here...I think I may need a tissue. I'm sure glad that I found this on the reccommend a lily/james fic...brilliant job. I like how you go back and forth between his emotions and her emotions and the way they just seem to flow and blend well together. I love it.


Author's Response: :D Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 11/20/07 22:52
Chapter: Smitten

If I married Mirabelle, I would spend my whole life wishing her eyes were green, and her hair was red. But even if they were, it wouldnt really matter, because it wouldnt be you. Its not the same feeling when she stands next to me. Youre the only one Ive ever wanted, end of story. I love you.
^^ amazing

Author's Response: :D Thank you!

Reviewer: LavanderLily
Date: 09/08/07 7:40
Chapter: Smitten

I love this story. It's my absolute favorite, and it always tears me up. I firmly believe that a story hasn't strongly affected you until it brings you to tears. That's what I've found in the second chapter. I sincerely hope you continue to write James/Lily fics because I love your romance stories. Your stories are better than several movies I've watched, and they were by a well-known company, which I won't state here.

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much~ I'm glad my stories touched you!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 08/03/07 13:11
Chapter: Smitten

aww so sweet i loved this storyline godd do i love your stories!! if u ever get a book out please make it of lily and james storys and tell me lol great job! but promise to tell me if u make a book!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, I will!

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/05/07 2:54
Chapter: Jealousy

Pooor Lily!!!!!! I was like on the verge of tearing up through this whole chapter, it's soooo sad!!!!!!

Author's Response: I agree!

Reviewer: LilysLove
Date: 06/19/07 17:02
Chapter: Smitten

Awwww! Oh, this is just so sweet. :] Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/14/07 22:40
Chapter: Smitten

u hav a relly good stry and i hope u hav ritten a lot more!

Author's Response: Yep! Thanks!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 03/18/07 12:47
Chapter: Smitten

wow, sirius summed it up quite well at the end. LOVED IT! you really are an excellent writer, and i love all of your james/lily stories. this story was SO cute. i can't believe it. it was just perfect and , i just loved it. great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 03/16/07 14:42
Chapter: Smitten

Beautifully written. You had me cheering James on throughout the whole thing!

Author's Response: I was with him too ;)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 02/24/07 14:03
Chapter: Smitten

That was cute...couldn't be better...great story just like the other ones u have!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank youuuuu!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 02/24/07 13:49
Chapter: Jealousy

Ur the best writer in this website..all ur storys are amazing including this one.....good I cried my eyes out....great job...I'm real into it!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D :D :D :D

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 02/23/07 22:05
Chapter: Smitten


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