AWww, I loved it. And Peter's smart in that last sentence, even though I want to literally rip out his throat!
did you ever think about making this one story?
oh please please please do another sequel!!!!!!!
you should think about combining them into one story. it would be awesome.
you should think about combining them into one story. it would be awesome.
Instead of sequels you might just want to write one story and warn people that updates might take awhile
I liked it! I definetly would like to read a sequel and yes... they are addicting.
Ack! I love sequels! Great job on this one! Keep 'em comin'!!!
Yes! Sequels are addicting. I can't wait for the next one. This one was even funnier than the first. I loved it when they all took out handkerchiefs after they'd laughed their heads off.
HAPPY WRITING!
ooh this was very good! I hope you'll continue to establish their relationship, it's been a wonderful read so far
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! if my chanting doesnt convince you i could beg? huh, huh? ohh i loved it please continue it. i love all your stories i'd love to see some more. its great to find someone else whos against remus/lily. well done and please please pleeeeeeassse keep it going. see? now i am begging you wretched woman, im that desperate and pathetic. he he.
i really like the way you included peter in this story. most fics don't include peter because of the obvious bias against him, but i think he's an important part of any lily/james fic.
overall very good, but i think that you should just create a single story.
it was great!
Author's Response: So are you! =D
I like it, but you shouldve just written chapters.
Author's Response: =D
I like it, but you shouldve just written chapters.
Author's Response: Well, I hadn't planned on writing this, so... I just had to make it a sequel.
you should definetly do a sequel, i like how you look at the whole relationship...
Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of forgot to write a sequel. Oopsie!
FINALLY SOMEONE!
You're one of the only people I've seen that hate Remus/Lily. Not saying the stories are bad, just the idea. Well, the explanation is on your page.
Awsome story, too.
Author's Response: Are we 'haters-of-Remus-Lily-lovers' really that rare? What a pity. I just can't stand the ideas for more reasons than one. Thanks a lot for reviewing.
Can't wait for the next sequal! :)
Author's Response: Sequel? Oh, yeah! I did say I was working on one, didn't I? *scratches chin* Well, it's finished... I just... psshaw... have no gut to send it in...
hehehe, very good job! i love your writing style and characters, and it was a very comical ending. i for one think that a sequel would be an excellent idea! just one tip: watch your spelling and grammar; for instance, here you say "remus was too nice either" which doesn't make sense, and there were a few spelling errors in there as well. otherwise, great job!
Author's Response: Yes, this story was definitely imperfect, but hey, I'm only human. With humanity comes impatience, and I just couldn't wait for my beta to finish her vacation.
Very well written. I like Peter's comment at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks! I felt that comment made most sense, and therefore should be last. Also, Peter needed to say it so he could play a big role in this story. I hate the stories in which Peter's always off on "Death Eater meetings."
