Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 06/20/08 12:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWww, I loved it. And Peter's smart in that last sentence, even though I want to literally rip out his throat!

Reviewer: myprinceonafirebolt
Date: 05/22/08 3:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

did you ever think about making this one story?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh please please please do another sequel!!!!!!!

Reviewer: R_Hr_Fan
Date: 10/26/07 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

you should think about combining them into one story. it would be awesome.

Reviewer: R_Hr_Fan
Date: 10/26/07 23:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

you should think about combining them into one story. it would be awesome.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 09/15/07 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Instead of sequels you might just want to write one story and warn people that updates might take awhile

Reviewer: kfbandgeek9241
Date: 09/08/07 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it! I definetly would like to read a sequel and yes... they are addicting.

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 08/13/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ack! I love sequels! Great job on this one! Keep 'em comin'!!!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/01/07 8:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yes! Sequels are addicting. I can't wait for the next one. This one was even funnier than the first. I loved it when they all took out handkerchiefs after they'd laughed their heads off.

HAPPY WRITING!

Reviewer: Rewan
Date: 05/14/07 0:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooh this was very good! I hope you'll continue to establish their relationship, it's been a wonderful read so far

Reviewer: tinkerbell12
Date: 05/02/07 2:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! if my chanting doesnt convince you i could beg? huh, huh? ohh i loved it please continue it. i love all your stories i'd love to see some more. its great to find someone else whos against remus/lily. well done and please please pleeeeeeassse keep it going. see? now i am begging you wretched woman, im that desperate and pathetic. he he.

Reviewer: paintedbyglamour
Date: 03/19/07 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

i really like the way you included peter in this story. most fics don't include peter because of the obvious bias against him, but i think he's an important part of any lily/james fic.
overall very good, but i think that you should just create a single story.

Reviewer: stareywomen
Date: 01/20/07 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was great!

Author's Response: So are you! =D

Reviewer: CiaraJ
Date: 01/07/07 22:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it, but you shouldve just written chapters.

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: CiaraJ
Date: 01/07/07 22:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it, but you shouldve just written chapters.

Author's Response: Well, I hadn't planned on writing this, so... I just had to make it a sequel.

Reviewer: Lilyflower24
Date: 12/13/06 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

you should definetly do a sequel, i like how you look at the whole relationship...

Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of forgot to write a sequel. Oopsie!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/08/06 22:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

FINALLY SOMEONE!

You're one of the only people I've seen that hate Remus/Lily. Not saying the stories are bad, just the idea. Well, the explanation is on your page.

Awsome story, too.

Author's Response: Are we 'haters-of-Remus-Lily-lovers' really that rare? What a pity. I just can't stand the ideas for more reasons than one. Thanks a lot for reviewing.

Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 11/02/06 21:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Can't wait for the next sequal! :)

Author's Response: Sequel? Oh, yeah! I did say I was working on one, didn't I? *scratches chin* Well, it's finished... I just... psshaw... have no gut to send it in...

Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 08/19/06 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

hehehe, very good job! i love your writing style and characters, and it was a very comical ending. i for one think that a sequel would be an excellent idea! just one tip: watch your spelling and grammar; for instance, here you say "remus was too nice either" which doesn't make sense, and there were a few spelling errors in there as well. otherwise, great job!

Author's Response: Yes, this story was definitely imperfect, but hey, I'm only human. With humanity comes impatience, and I just couldn't wait for my beta to finish her vacation.

Reviewer: sinfonia_concertante
Date: 08/15/06 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very well written. I like Peter's comment at the end.

Author's Response: Thanks! I felt that comment made most sense, and therefore should be last. Also, Peter needed to say it so he could play a big role in this story. I hate the stories in which Peter's always off on "Death Eater meetings."

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