Reviews For Trading Places
Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/10/06 9:13
Chapter: Trading Places

Hi,
Great job - too bad this is just a one-shot, you've really set up a longer story here that would be really fun to read (and probably write!) I really want to know what happens at the wand shop and how they get out of this. I think you did a great job at the beginning showing Fred and George discovering the swap. You have a good grasp of their character and dialogue and I loved the bit about mirror image twins. Good luck in the challenge!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I always feel so awkward writing dialogue, so it's good to hear it was in their voice. I have no earthly idea how they're going to get out of this one :P

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/09/06 13:25
Chapter: Trading Places

I never thought about how a body would react if a left handed person ended up in a right handed person's body. That is a very interesting story. I hope that you continue it sometime. It kinda seems unfinished. Very entertaining, however!

Author's Response: I hadn't either until just then. Made me glad I wasn't in that situation! ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 08/09/06 4:08
Chapter: Trading Places

wow! I should read more

Author's Response: There were a whole series of fics for this challenge by different authors - you should be able to check them out under the contest submissions heading! :)

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