This perfectly represents ron as a student. Wouldnt it have been funny if he got a good grade and no one knew it was butterbeer. Gred and Forge would be proud!!! love it. ta- tha_looney_one
Haha! That was just so funny! Ron was so cute. I admit, I already have a soft spot for him... But anyway’ I like how he was just writing down whatever felt right.
“I made a wit sharpening potion at the suggestion of a friend,” she said. “The wit-sharpening potion suits me because it’s to make one smart, which…” Hermione went pink. “I guess I am.”
I just loved that, I could completely imagine Hermione presenting and ten going pink. Haha. Too bad Snape didn't walk in when Ron was presenting his Gryffindor spirit. If Snape had he might have died. Too bad...
Oh I thought I had already reviewed this. I know I've already read it.
Well I thought it was very creative of you to work in substitute professors. they're also so cheerful and they almost always are welcome. Professor Berezi was very entertaining. She's so carefree and fun! I enjoyed the comment about Snape's arse, by the way.
I enjoyed Ron's potion essay very much. I thought it was very clever to work in "chivalry is dead." Very very genius. Same for the "arrogance" bit. The compassion was also nice. It was very in-character of Hermione to not be able to find a complex potion that represents her. You know, sometimes I think she's a touch insane. I would've liked a bit more humor involved with the firewhisky part though. I'm sure you could've worked something in xD
Your interpretation of toast was pure genius. Very very creative. I was shocked at it, but now it makes complete sense! Pooh on Snape for ruining it all.
Author's Response: Yeah, you have read this... You're the mod who validated it! ;) Thanks for the review, Beth. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and found it in character. I agree with you on Hermione; she is a bit insane. Thanks again for the lovely review! -MadMar