Reviewer: doorknobs
Date: 08/20/06 5:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

I read this a while ago, but it was so good that I had to come back and review! I really enjoyed reading this. Well Done, and keep on writing, you've got talent!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement! I am working on another and comments like yours do give one incentive! S-

Reviewer: Scriptor
Date: 08/01/06 13:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thanks for the feedback! I didn't even know the story had been published yet. It's not very good, but it's my first HP fic and I hope to do better in the future!

Reviewer: invisiblenudnik
Date: 07/31/06 23:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a very intresting idea! At first I thought it was going a different way, but I really liked this. I wonder if that boy who helped her was Harry Potter or not...oh well, the best stories have secrets, I know. Snape seemed a little OOC at first, but you did a good job explaining why that was so (even then I can't see him changing his teaching style that much).
Hm...if I was a little less tired, I would find something to nitpick. But you get out of my nitpickyness for now. :-)

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 07/30/06 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a good story! Good job

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