I read this a while ago, but it was so good that I had to come back and review! I really enjoyed reading this. Well Done, and keep on writing, you've got talent!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement! I am working on another and comments like yours do give one incentive! S-
Thanks for the feedback! I didn't even know the story had been published yet. It's not very good, but it's my first HP fic and I hope to do better in the future!
This is a very intresting idea! At first I thought it was going a different way, but I really liked this. I wonder if that boy who helped her was Harry Potter or not...oh well, the best stories have secrets, I know. Snape seemed a little OOC at first, but you did a good job explaining why that was so (even then I can't see him changing his teaching style that much).
Hm...if I was a little less tired, I would find something to nitpick. But you get out of my nitpickyness for now. :-)
That was a good story! Good job