Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 05/24/07 9:27
Chapter: One-shot

I can't put into words what I felt in the fic - all I can possibly say is thank you... this was a wonderful fic to read.

Reviewer: VeniaTaint
Date: 12/03/06 8:28
Chapter: One-shot

That's really beautiful...GREAT JOB

Reviewer: echo123
Date: 10/04/06 19:31
Chapter: One-shot


Reviewer: rubeushagrid
Date: 09/14/06 21:16
Chapter: One-shot

Just finished reading "And In Your Loving Memory"and I loved it. I am not generally a sentimental person, but I got very teary-eyed and choked-up before I finished.Thank you for such a moving story.


Reviewer: TXwitch
Date: 08/15/06 18:58
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, I could have cried with them. It was so beautiful and beautifilly written. So many loved ones are lost and then some are forgtten and that should never happen. Love the quote also.

Reviewer: chica91
Date: 06/14/06 14:50
Chapter: One-shot

Wow... that was amazing.. touching... I almost cried.

Reviewer: KJPotter
Date: 05/09/06 21:59
Chapter: One-shot

Goosebumps. Absolutely brilliant. You have an amazing gift. All I can say is a most humble but sincere Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: fairies_r_real
Date: 04/28/06 15:35
Chapter: One-shot

Wow this is a great story!!! It's definitely getting added to my favourites list!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 04/27/06 15:23
Chapter: One-shot

Beautifully written. I really liked this one-shot not only because it's so realistic and has such a moving theme, but also because of some of the imagery you used.

oh- wait before I get into quotes I want to mention that I loved Luna's characterization. The whole story with Dean was amazing. It's like a little snippet of the side-story Jo had to cut. Really loved it.

Okay, so here a couple of the lines I absolutely loved:

but we can't exactly smash their faces in the truth. No matter how satisfying it might be to try."

and for some reason I overloolked this second one the first couple of reads, but I just realized how nicely it fits with Hogwarts' response at the end:

Luna turned and placed her hands upon the rough stones of Hogwarts. "We need your help."

and my favourite:

And we will break the silence

I almost wished it would end here, because that one line was just so conclusive and it fit perfectly...

In short it was an amazing one-shot, thanks for a great read...*goes to find more cool stuff to read in my newly found free time*...=)

Reviewer: Tara_Q
Date: 04/09/06 13:20
Chapter: One-shot

amazing....powerful...there are just no words to describe

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 12/19/05 17:06
Chapter: One-shot

Beautiful, just beautiful. It makes me cry inside to think about how this applies to real life: soldiers and people all over the world die every day because of war and natural disasters, and yet no one cares because it doesn't affect them. I wish we could make a memorial to everyone, just like Hermione did.

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 09/02/05 8:52
Chapter: One-shot

That was touching beyond all belief. Perfect, and beautiful. And ... right.

Reviewer: Ariana Archer
Date: 05/30/05 21:42
Chapter: One-shot

wow... this is one of the best fics I've ever read. wow, I'm crying, and that's really rare. I love how you put the Bible verse in it. The grief portrayed in it is so real, so human. You can't help but love it. Thanks.

Reviewer: lavenderbrown_47
Date: 05/13/05 23:48
Chapter: One-shot

I love it, I cried. I love your work. I didnt think I should write the same thing in each review box, but I love your work. One small error. Sirius Black shouldnt be on the "list of the dead" because he is not dead. :) I wish I could give it an 1000000

Reviewer: RedHeadMama
Date: 02/26/05 19:19
Chapter: One-shot

very well written, very moving, i like it alot

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 01/31/05 15:25
Chapter: One-shot

I am crying right now. Your writing deeply moves me. I think you are a wonderful writer.

Reviewer: Masked One
Date: 01/24/05 8:40
Chapter: One-shot

Beautiful, touching, deep, and well written. I liked that it didnt center around Harry, but included someone else taking the initiative, and I love the way you write Hermione and Luna. Im nearly crying after reading that, and I dont cry easily.

Reviewer: the_bartender713
Date: 01/20/05 19:53
Chapter: One-shot

it brought tears to my eyes. thanks.

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 01/13/05 15:14
Chapter: One-shot

That was incredible. I can't explain how much so. Absolutely beautiful.

Reviewer: LittleMissKnowItAll7
Date: 01/09/05 20:55
Chapter: One-shot

This is just beautiful. It made me cry.

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