Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:33
Chapter: The War Begins...

Hehe, yeah, this kinda reminds me of...what was that fic called...I think it was...Always Stick Together! Yeah, that's what this one reminds me of! Really good! Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:27
Chapter: The Beginings of Love

Awwwww...I'm really loving this Lily-touching-James-while-he's-in-his-stag-form-and-not-knowing-it's-him-and-him-saving-her thing that's going on in a lot of fics these days! It's so cute! Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:20
Chapter: The Love of a Son

OH my god, you're a genius! That has to be one of the most romantic scenes in a fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Update SOON! Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:16
Chapter: An Unexpected Turn

Ooh, this could turn dirty, lol, I'm just kidding. We're very lucky Sirius isn't Head Boy. I love this story, but please do check spelling, it's kind of confusing to read. Love it, love it, love it, Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:10
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

Wow. That was really amusing. "...I heard what you were saying about, and I decided to give you my input..." I was LMAO! Should the circumstances ever be similar, I am soooo going to do that ;D. *laughs* Tash

Reviewer: Natasha Johnson
Date: 12/08/05 16:01
Chapter: Head Boy?!

This is really good! I agree with everyone about the spelling thing, but I give it a 10! Portrayals are wonderful. Lol, Lily should be happy about that last bit of news, hahaha... Tash

Reviewer: BroadwayGurl
Date: 12/06/05 9:09
Chapter: Head Boy?!

Hey- Look, I am a huge fan of James/Lily fan fics, and I would love to read yours, because it looks awesome. However, you need to go through each chapter of your story and spellcheck it- you are misspelling words that are very easy and would take two seconds to look up in a dictionary. For now, I am giving you a five because of this- however, my content rating for your story is much higher. : ) Good Luck!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/04/05 21:48
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Sirius is dead meat! I can't wait to see how Lily and James react to when they find out!

Reviewer: Jaime Potter
Date: 11/30/05 15:28
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Sirius is in TROUBLE. put more snogging in please. I hope Lily realizes that she really does like James.

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 11/30/05 6:49
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Sirius is going to be so dead. I can't wait to find out more. I hope that you update soon. It is all really good.

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 11/28/05 21:12
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Oh no, things were going so well. Sirius is in big trouble now!... update soon

Reviewer: LaaDeeDah
Date: 11/28/05 0:52
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

I have a few suggestions for this story. 1. Watch your spelling and grammar. 2. Try to stay away from clichs like having the separate heads dorms and having James save Lily from Remus. 3. Develop your characters more, I would definately like to see more of their personalities, rather that lots of snogging.

Reviewer: believe_in_yourself201
Date: 11/25/05 11:52
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

oh y god this sory is so awexome awexome and bloody brilliant please update soon it already been a week

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 11/24/05 16:55
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Great job! I think Sirius is in big trouble now! Update soon!

Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 11/17/05 22:55
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

definatly worth the wait yayaya i can't wait for the next chappie i am drunk ou HP seeing as GOF is out tommorrow ya next chappie soon pleas yaaaaaaaaaaaa that was an awsome chappie

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 11/15/05 11:28
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

wow!!! well worth the wait

Reviewer: mrs james potter
Date: 11/12/05 5:57
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

This story is soooo perfect.can't wait for the next chappie:DU R the best:D

Reviewer: xAthenax
Date: 11/11/05 20:44
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

It was worth the long wait, wonderful. ^^

Reviewer: Donniedarkorocksmyworld
Date: 11/07/05 18:05
Chapter: Head Boy?!

Ooo, I love this story! You might want to do spell check but other than that, I love it!!!

Reviewer: redhead_weasley08
Date: 10/29/05 18:05
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

Good story- but LILY AND SNAPE??? i'm a bit confused....you might want to work on your spelling a bit, but I can't spell to well either!! REALLY good

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