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Name: Rae_of_sunshine (Signed) · Date: 02/17/06 9:34 · For: A Welcome Back Kiss...
it really really enjoyed your story but i noticed that you have quite a lot of gramatical and spelling mistakes - not that I am one to talk because my wrting is full of them! If you, like me, find them difficuilt to correct - go on the forums and grab a beta (he or she will correct your work for you). Apart from that really good story!


Name: Avenger_of_Dumbldore (Signed) · Date: 02/11/06 11:45 · For: The Love of a Son
HMM... it is good. I think that Dumbledore telling the whole school that one childe will get an owl to say that his parents are dead is a little out of character. Also, Molly is pure blood, so her parents would not be muggles. Next time, you may want to reaserch a little better, or put an AU warning, because I dont thiunk it is cannon for James' parents to be aurors. Besides that, however, great job! I loved the feeling that you had at the end, with the kiss, but next time you may want to describe a little bit mroe of the tension is the common room with the owl and stuff. I am giving you a 7, but I am a hard marker!


Name: morticia b (Signed) · Date: 02/10/06 2:43 · For: "Nikita who...?"
I liked it but at the same time... I don't like leaving nasty reviews so please accept it as creative criticism instead. Very good - the bathrooms disappearring, McGonagoll etc. But i thought the quill thing with James and Nikita was so GoF (Harry and Cho). Sorry.


Name: beth1191 (Signed) · Date: 01/24/06 19:21 · For: "Nikita who...?"
lily seemes VERY mad.what is she going to do?great chapter


Name: LaneTechFreshie (Signed) · Date: 01/08/06 13:31 · For: "Nikita who...?"
Pretty scary last line there....What is Lily gonna be up to? Apart from the grammar and spelling errors, which make it quite annoying to read at some points, it's a good plot. Except I think the romance went way too fast. But, whatever. People want you to update so, well ....


Name: ashka (Signed) · Date: 12/16/05 12:39 · For: Some Startling Reveilences
ahhh. thanks for clearing that up.


Name: ashka (Signed) · Date: 12/16/05 12:38 · For: "Nikita who...?"
YAY!! finally an update, and a very good one to!


Name: Quiditch fan (Signed) · Date: 12/13/05 21:21 · For: "Nikita who...?"
i really like your story....it rocks! anyway, i love that lily is pissed...and i don;t know exactly what to think of niki...good or bad...hmmmmm. 10/10!


Name: magick (Signed) · Date: 12/11/05 18:26 · For: "Nikita who...?"
Awesome, I just can't say anything else. Awesome!


Name: HeRmYgInS (Signed) · Date: 12/11/05 17:54 · For: "Nikita who...?"
i think there's something up with the new girl. good job! 'James snickered. "You'll be seeing her in your nightmares."' HAHAHA!


Name: mrs james potter (Signed) · Date: 12/11/05 4:26 · For: Head Boy?!
Really good, just it's strange especially for James to move on so soon...and i think something's wrong with that Nikita girl...just pls explain the whole sirius-cursed-james-in-second-year better!thanx


Name: mrs james potter (Signed) · Date: 12/11/05 4:26 · For: Head Boy?!
Really good, just it's strange especially for James to move on so soon...and i think something's wrong with that Nikita girl...just pls explain the whole sirius-cursed-james-in-second-year better!thanx


Name: Natasha Johnson (Signed) · Date: 12/10/05 20:54 · For: "Nikita who...?"
James! That was fast! It seems unlike Lily to get revenge, but love does that to people...not that I know, lol. -Tash


Name: Sirius Krummy Fan (Signed) · Date: 12/10/05 20:40 · For: "Nikita who...?"
Ahhh....I loved your story but come on Jamesie couldn't have moved on so quickly...Lily is pissed...please do update soon so we can find out what she does...u are in my favs...10/10


Name: believe_in_yourself201 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/05 16:52 · For: "Nikita who...?"
ah come on james and liy 4ever neway please get them back together soon bloody brilliant


Name: KayOS_Ronluva4eva (Signed) · Date: 12/10/05 16:40 · For: "Nikita who...?"
i love it i love it i love it love i love it i love it i love it i do i do. i have a friend whos dog is named nikita. any ways i love the story. lily is pissed. i REALLY need to know her revenge. so update real soon. i bet u lilly still likes james.


Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 12/10/05 16:05 · For: "Nikita who...?"
That was really good! O, Lily is pissed. What wil she do to him? I cna't believe James already got someone new! 10/10, and please hurry with the next one!


Name: ashka (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 10:25 · For: Some Startling Reveilences
slightly confused. why did lily shout at james when it was all sirius fault and james had nothing to do with it???

Author's Response: Because she didn't know Sirius didn't tell him so she thought he wasn't going to tell her about it. But truthfully, James didn't know...


Name: Natasha Johnson (Signed) · Date: 12/08/05 16:51 · For: Some Startling Reveilences
Oh my god!!!!!!!! Okay, you must tell me, what was the word that she said?! Wow, yeah, Sirius better look out! Love it, and if you don't update soon, I'll...I don't know! But it'll be bad! Trust me ;D. lol. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Tash


Name: Natasha Johnson (Signed) · Date: 12/08/05 16:43 · For: A Secret Told
I am officially amused. My favorite author is Tamora Pierce, and you write a LOT like her. Especially CERTAIN parts...you all know what I mean. ;D. Goodness Dumbledore! What WAS he thinking?! lol, Tash


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