Reviewer: JamesandLilyforever
Date: 06/25/07 18:35
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

Poor james I don't think he deserved such a harsh prank. He got beat up for chips sake!.I don't think it was funny at all update soon

Reviewer: my name is naima
Date: 06/25/07 15:56
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

do a spell check or something

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess14
Date: 06/21/07 23:44
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

that jerk! (lol)

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 02/19/07 1:05
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

y hant u updated yet this stirie rocks!

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 07/07/06 12:27
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

ooo, i love it you just HAVE to finish, is she part Veela like Fleur?? well anyways hurry and finish!!

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 06/28/06 10:10
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

ohhhh! revenge.

Reviewer: nsg7harrypotterfan
Date: 06/09/06 15:49
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

Interesting.....very interesting......it was really good but please get James back together will Lily......

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/23/06 10:05
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

really liked this one.... i hope we can get some more soon!!

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 21:16
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

uh ooo... great chaper though

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 19:51
Chapter: A Secret Told

hmmm.... that was a little fast.... i really liked it though

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 18:57
Chapter: The War Begins...

very nice!!!! want more!!!

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 18:53
Chapter: The Beginings of Love

ok i wasnt going to say anything... but this is like the 3rd time that ive seen Slytherian.... please fix the error.... other than that... I LOVE THE STORY!!!

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 18:44
Chapter: The Love of a Son

wow... i was soo into this chapter i almost forgot to review.. but i caught myself... loved th chapter.. so many different emotions portrayed... i feel so bad for james... :(

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 18:35
Chapter: An Unexpected Turn

wow... very nice but i agree... there are a lot of grammatical corrections... might want to go through and fix them!!

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 12:13
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

hmmmm... why would she hug him??? i feel bad for james... but all in all... great chapter

Reviewer: iluvharryandron
Date: 04/22/06 11:50
Chapter: Head Boy?!

hmmm.... starts out like all other james/lily fics but i still have high hopes for this fic

Reviewer: Arina
Date: 04/09/06 17:19
Chapter: Head Boy?!

Hey that was pretty good. There was just some spelling errors that could be fixed (they'd make the story seem much more professional :D). I'd also like to point out about how late the Hogwart's Letter's came in...but never mind that. It's a great story.

Reviewer: ashka
Date: 03/27/06 10:28
Chapter: A Secret Told

really good, but Carre'e' is not the french word for room and neither is chambre Sophia Loren (chambre is BEDroom) piece with accents is room

Reviewer: u no poo
Date: 02/25/06 9:07
Chapter: Head Boy?!

heyyyyyy,that was great update soon

Reviewer: Rae_of_sunshine
Date: 02/17/06 9:58
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

your writing has really improved, the story is developing really well :D

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