Poor james I don't think he deserved such a harsh prank. He got beat up for chips sake!.I don't think it was funny at all update soon
do a spell check or something
that jerk! (lol)
y hant u updated yet this stirie rocks!
ooo, i love it you just HAVE to finish, is she part Veela like Fleur?? well anyways hurry and finish!!
Interesting.....very interesting......it was really good but please get James back together will Lily......
really liked this one.... i hope we can get some more soon!!
uh ooo... great chaper though
hmmm.... that was a little fast.... i really liked it though
very nice!!!! want more!!!
ok i wasnt going to say anything... but this is like the 3rd time that ive seen Slytherian.... please fix the error.... other than that... I LOVE THE STORY!!!
wow... i was soo into this chapter i almost forgot to review.. but i caught myself... loved th chapter.. so many different emotions portrayed... i feel so bad for james... :(
wow... very nice but i agree... there are a lot of grammatical corrections... might want to go through and fix them!!
hmmmm... why would she hug him??? i feel bad for james... but all in all... great chapter
hmmm.... starts out like all other james/lily fics but i still have high hopes for this fic
Hey that was pretty good. There was just some spelling errors that could be fixed (they'd make the story seem much more professional :D). I'd also like to point out about how late the Hogwart's Letter's came in...but never mind that. It's a great story.
really good, but Carre'e' is not the french word for room and neither is chambre Sophia Loren (chambre is BEDroom) piece with accents is room
heyyyyyy,that was great update soon
your writing has really improved, the story is developing really well :D