aww that was so sweet, keep updating, please!
Very good story:) Please keep updating, gtg:P
this is great so far, please post the next chappie!
Hey Aylissa, it's great so far, hurry up and finish. Hmm I'll bug Jessie to read it, lol. Well now that you are busy with the fanfic, you better not forget about me and Jessie. ~Emma
I really like your story, but I also thought you might like to know that the last few paragraphs are repeated and the readers end up reading 4 or 5 paragraphs twice
Author's Response: Opps! Sorry, i was typing it on Microsoft and i must've accidently added too much! it should be alright now...
omg tell me this isn't happening! not lilly & snape!!! i thought she like james though, i know she liked james. i'm very confused. are they cousins or something??????? really good though. might suggest you to check your spelling a bit. keep it up!
Author's Response: Okay, to clear up your confusion. There is a secret to that. It'll be explained later. And, yes, I know clear well about my spelling. Sorry!! And thank-you for reviewing. It helps me alot!!
OOhhhh, Love it!! Write more Chapters please!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And I'll get right on that! Christmas may be slow though. You know the whole shibang..
yeh its good. but do check the spelling. but it is cool. good job!
good first chapter. upate soon soon because 1st chapters are always the dullest. note: check your spelling *hint hint*