Hello :) I like your story very much so far. Just wanted to tell you something though, sorry if someone else has already pointed that out to you, but room in French is said "chambre" not Carré, carré is the French for square (the shape). Keep going on with the good work :) I'm going to read your next chapter asap :)
Well..every1's already said wat i've wanted to say but i'll say it as well..i love the fic and i think u should be proud cuz this is my first-ever james/lily fanfic..really great..hope u update soon!..get it finished..lol!
The_Heir_of_Gryffindor, are you abandoning your loyal readers? hehe :) I hope you can post soon please please, we haven't heard of your story in a while!
Author's Response: Never! You all are so good to me! lol....Chapter * is in Que!
when r u gonna friggen update?
Author's Response: Who ever reads this, I'm sorry. They aren't letting me update. Chapter 8 is so hard. i promise I'll have it up as soon as I can. Thanks.
great, i wud of thought lily to be more sensible but i love rebellious people!
awww, thats my fave chapter so far!
i love that "do you belive in love at first kiss" thats so cool, did u come up with it yourself?
cool, i love the mirrors!
wow, lily and snape, hugging, there a sight i never thought i'd have to imaine, i hope this is going somewhere good because it is rather YUCK! good story though, i have a suggestion with the spelling, as a parent or friend or even a beta to read is before submitting it, that was ull get better reviews. xxx
that was good, i liked the ending, him and lily evans= ha ha ha, youve got to be kidding!
this is a really awesome story..i luv it
wow, major typos....... still, awesome story
I love lily and james fics! UPDATE SOON :)! I love it.
i am very interested in where this story is going. please post soon!!
Wow! Awsome story!!! Update soon!
Great story! I have a totally random question but one of your characters reminds me of a character in a book I read. It Alanna from Tamora Pierce's books. Do you happen to read those? Anyway back to the point excellent story the Sirius side is going to be funny.
Author's Response: Yes, Alanna comes from that story. I have the whole complete set. Even the new Aly book. Trickster's Queen.
action! i love action! i also love romance.. and soap operas.... and playing the flute.... and cheese... okay, off the point. keep writing!
Wow, this is really good! I absolutly love it! Great job. I noticed a few spelling and gramical errors, but no big deal. If you would like I could be the beta reader for the chapters (beta readers go through, correct spelling, gives constuctive critisum *sp?* and makes suggestions.) If you would like me to, please email me at firstname.lastname@example.org - great job xox ~Shell