Reviewer: Arduina
Date: 04/10/05 13:31
Chapter: An Unexpected Turn

Hello :) I like your story very much so far. Just wanted to tell you something though, sorry if someone else has already pointed that out to you, but room in French is said "chambre" not Carr, carr is the French for square (the shape). Keep going on with the good work :) I'm going to read your next chapter asap :)

Reviewer: Mystik_Ecko
Date: 04/08/05 13:48
Chapter: A Secret Told

Well..every1's already said wat i've wanted to say but i'll say it as well..i love the fic and i think u should be proud cuz this is my first-ever james/lily fanfic..really great..hope u update soon!..get it finished..lol!

Reviewer: x0x_honey69
Date: 02/26/05 15:38
Chapter: A Secret Told

The_Heir_of_Gryffindor, are you abandoning your loyal readers? hehe :) I hope you can post soon please please, we haven't heard of your story in a while!

Author's Response: Never! You all are so good to me! lol....Chapter * is in Que!

Reviewer: lanalang92
Date: 02/23/05 16:36
Chapter: A Secret Told

when r u gonna friggen update?

Author's Response: Who ever reads this, I'm sorry. They aren't letting me update. Chapter 8 is so hard. i promise I'll have it up as soon as I can. Thanks.

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 7:26
Chapter: A Secret Told

great, i wud of thought lily to be more sensible but i love rebellious people!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 7:22
Chapter: The War Begins...

go action!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 7:18
Chapter: The Beginings of Love

awww, thats my fave chapter so far!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 7:07
Chapter: The Love of a Son

i love that "do you belive in love at first kiss" thats so cool, did u come up with it yourself?

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 7:03
Chapter: An Unexpected Turn

cool, i love the mirrors!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 6:57
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

wow, lily and snape, hugging, there a sight i never thought i'd have to imaine, i hope this is going somewhere good because it is rather YUCK! good story though, i have a suggestion with the spelling, as a parent or friend or even a beta to read is before submitting it, that was ull get better reviews. xxx

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 6:47
Chapter: Head Boy?!

that was good, i liked the ending, him and lily evans= ha ha ha, youve got to be kidding!

Reviewer: kai
Date: 02/05/05 12:07
Chapter: A Secret Told

this is a really awesome story..i luv it

Reviewer: Hermione_Clone7
Date: 02/03/05 21:04
Chapter: A Secret Told

wow, major typos....... still, awesome story

Reviewer: x0x_honey69
Date: 02/02/05 21:32
Chapter: A Secret Told

I love lily and james fics! UPDATE SOON :)! I love it.

Reviewer: LisaK
Date: 02/01/05 16:53
Chapter: A Secret Told

i am very interested in where this story is going. please post soon!!

Reviewer: staci_stryde
Date: 01/17/05 10:33
Chapter: A Secret Told

Wow! Awsome story!!! Update soon!

Reviewer: whispercat12
Date: 01/08/05 20:09
Chapter: A Secret Told

Great story! I have a totally random question but one of your characters reminds me of a character in a book I read. It Alanna from Tamora Pierce's books. Do you happen to read those? Anyway back to the point excellent story the Sirius side is going to be funny.

Author's Response: Yes, Alanna comes from that story. I have the whole complete set. Even the new Aly book. Trickster's Queen.

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 01/08/05 16:39
Chapter: A Secret Told

woohoo!!

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 01/04/05 6:20
Chapter: The War Begins...

action! i love action! i also love romance.. and soap operas.... and playing the flute.... and cheese... okay, off the point. keep writing!

Reviewer: Shelly7
Date: 12/31/04 18:36
Chapter: The Beginings of Love

Wow, this is really good! I absolutly love it! Great job. I noticed a few spelling and gramical errors, but no big deal. If you would like I could be the beta reader for the chapters (beta readers go through, correct spelling, gives constuctive critisum *sp?* and makes suggestions.) If you would like me to, please email me at shelly999872@yahoo.com - great job xox ~Shell

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