Reviewer: harry potter lovee
Date: 01/01/11 13:00
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

rely good! keep writing!

Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli
Date: 01/27/09 20:32
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

Makes no sense.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/06/08 17:17
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

I'm really enjoying this fic, there's a lot of funny stuff going on. Just thought I'd mention that in this chapter you've got Madam Pomphrey running the library, did she and Madam Pince switch for the day too? Anyway, I thought the body switching prank was excellent, but very cruel on James as he hadn't known what Sirius had done and wasn't to blame. It was also very harsh for them all to laugh when he got punched by those other boys. I think Lily should be his servant for a week to make up for it. Anyway, hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: daniels_girl
Date: 10/10/07 18:04
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

good job!! plz keep writing!! cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: daniels_girl
Date: 10/09/07 16:46
Chapter: The Beginings of Love

so tender and sweet!! good writing

Reviewer: daniels_girl
Date: 10/09/07 16:41
Chapter: The Love of a Son

awww...great job. u had me almost in tears when james got the letter!! (dnt think im crazy)

Reviewer: daniels_girl
Date: 10/08/07 13:48
Chapter: Head Boy?!

good start!

Reviewer: cairyangel
Date: 08/19/07 3:19
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

omg, but this means that james will still get loads of girls right? cause he's handsome, nto cause of the spell!!!!

btw, new reader

Reviewer: cairyangel
Date: 08/19/07 3:18
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

omg, but this means that james will still get loads of girls right? cause he's handsome, nto cause of the spell!!!!

btw, new reader

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 08/15/07 21:41
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

You really really need a beta. This has a LOT of typos, as good as it may be.

Reviewer: His_Mistress
Date: 07/28/07 10:39
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

Hi are you still writing this story or is it an old one??

Author's Response: Still working on it.

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/16/07 19:27
Chapter: Pranking the Prankster

awesome story, PLEASE UPDATE!!! =D

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/16/07 18:31
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

why? why did you have to totally kill my happy chapter ending with that horrible mental picture! I'm serious I think I just gagged a little. But I did love the whole 'I heard what you said on the train and I've decided to give you my input' and then she snogs him. It was really cute =)

Reviewer: hope_is_bright
Date: 07/06/07 22:45
Chapter: A Welcome Back Kiss...

did you fail english........or even take it?

Reviewer: coolcat1000
Date: 07/03/07 15:26
Chapter: The War Begins...

i thought u cant apparate in hogwarts!?

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/02/07 10:53
Chapter: A Secret Told

Oh good God, I have just re-read this after reading some of the reviews, and if *that* was supposed to be sex, then, well I'm worried about James because tbh, it really didn't last too long..

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/01/07 17:04
Chapter: "Nikita who...?"

McGonAgall...PLEASE stop offending me like this!!

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/01/07 17:00
Chapter: Some Startling Reveilences

Ridiculous.

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/01/07 16:52
Chapter: The War Begins...

You can't apparate inside the Hogwarts grounds!! You are as bad as Ron & Harry! Read Hogwarts: A History!

Reviewer: StodgePoopin
Date: 07/01/07 16:40
Chapter: An Unexpected Turn

I find your writing a struggle to read and very child-like. I think this is generally to do with the repetitiveness which makes it more effort to read, therefore it becomes boring. An don't do JKR the injustice of spelling her house names wrong. It's 'Slytherin' for future referance.

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