rely good! keep writing!
I'm really enjoying this fic, there's a lot of funny stuff going on. Just thought I'd mention that in this chapter you've got Madam Pomphrey running the library, did she and Madam Pince switch for the day too? Anyway, I thought the body switching prank was excellent, but very cruel on James as he hadn't known what Sirius had done and wasn't to blame. It was also very harsh for them all to laugh when he got punched by those other boys. I think Lily should be his servant for a week to make up for it. Anyway, hope to see more soon.
good job!! plz keep writing!! cant wait for the next chapter
so tender and sweet!! good writing
awww...great job. u had me almost in tears when james got the letter!! (dnt think im crazy)
omg, but this means that james will still get loads of girls right? cause he's handsome, nto cause of the spell!!!!
btw, new reader
omg, but this means that james will still get loads of girls right? cause he's handsome, nto cause of the spell!!!!
btw, new reader
You really really need a beta. This has a LOT of typos, as good as it may be.
Hi are you still writing this story or is it an old one??
Author's Response: Still working on it.
awesome story, PLEASE UPDATE!!! =D
why? why did you have to totally kill my happy chapter ending with that horrible mental picture! I'm serious I think I just gagged a little. But I did love the whole 'I heard what you said on the train and I've decided to give you my input' and then she snogs him. It was really cute =)
did you fail english........or even take it?
i thought u cant apparate in hogwarts!?
Oh good God, I have just re-read this after reading some of the reviews, and if *that* was supposed to be sex, then, well I'm worried about James because tbh, it really didn't last too long..
McGonAgall...PLEASE stop offending me like this!!
You can't apparate inside the Hogwarts grounds!! You are as bad as Ron & Harry! Read Hogwarts: A History!
I find your writing a struggle to read and very child-like. I think this is generally to do with the repetitiveness which makes it more effort to read, therefore it becomes boring. An don't do JKR the injustice of spelling her house names wrong. It's 'Slytherin' for future referance.
