Reviews For How He Knew
Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/09/06 12:11
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

That is my favourite one-shot on this site ^_^

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you. I've been having a crappy day so far, but that makes things better. Thanks.

Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 10/27/06 20:18
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Really good! Love to read more!! ~Ginny~

Author's Response: Well! By all means, do read more.

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 09/24/06 1:40
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

i mean upside down

Author's Response: Whoa! You even wrote it wrong. You really were distracted!

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 09/24/06 1:39
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Very cute... i was so distracted at the end i almost put mu glasses on inside out!

Author's Response: Distracted? Haahaa... Yes, James' quite the distraction. ;)

Reviewer: 2SiriusB
Date: 09/01/06 19:07
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Yes, I know, I've already sublmitted a review, but everytime I read this, I fall in love with it all over again! The dialogue is sooo good!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Aside from getting my own digital camera in the mail, that made my day. The mark of a good author is when people re-read her stories. I'm so glad you came back to it. Really! I love it too. When you write something, you give a bit of your imagination and self into it... thanks for the second review. Really.

Reviewer: Dora_
Date: 08/21/06 11:51
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Best one-shot I've ever read! Absolutely brilliant!

Author's Response: Are you serious? Oh my gosh! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 08/19/06 19:56
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

bloody brilliant

Author's Response: LOL! "Bloody brilliant"? Well, that was a ruddy good review, mate. Tips to you.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 08/15/06 12:34
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Grr, I can't delete that first review. Sorry. Read the 2nd one, it's the same as the 1st, but I forgot to add something. That was the longest review I have ever written :)

Author's Response: I think it's the longest review that I've ever received.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 08/15/06 12:32
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Oooh, I so would have hit him if he'd have used those last two lines on me. Don't ask how I know.

That was great really, I can relate to it it ways that I will not even get into, but I have to say that I really hated that ending. No offense meant whatsoever, but it was just like... Wow, this has a long explaination.

See, I see this as Lily has liked James and still does, but she won't admit it, probably not even to herself. She had an excuse to hate that she was falling for him before because he was a jerk, but now he's a more pleasant person. So the ball is in Lily's court now, unfortunately for her, as it would seem ay the moent. She likes James, people are starting to realize that she does, and she really had no excuse to pretend that she doesn't care for him anymore. So James corners her since he knows she's fallen for him, going back to his arrogant, jerk-y-ness. His arrogance was something he had grown out of (which was majorly for the better), but now he's falling back into that habit? And Lily just allows him to?? James is telling her how great he is, essentially "Oh, you worship me too... just like everybody else. You love me because I'm awesome." And Lily just melts. Probably still somewhat unwillingly, but she just melts into his arms. Maybe she has fallen for him, which is fine, but now she just shrinks back. Meek little Lily. Arrogant jerk Potter. And these people fall in love and are married without an abusive relationship??? Sure, James should always have his cocky streak, that's just an irreplaceable trait for him. He's going to backtalk his bosses even, to a degree that he won't get fired. But I think that was just a bit much the end there. More than a bit much. Lily didn't change him, it's just James growing up a little. We can't all act fifteen forever. And sure, he's still going to be immature. Blowing up his friends' drinks, hexing people who deserve it. That's just part of his character. But he shouldn't be so "You love me because I'm great, you can't help it." I'm just not seeing it. But then again, that's just me. Maybe you're trying to show that James was arrogant towards Lily and always was a jerk to her?? I dunno. But that's the signal I'm getting.

-Chris

Author's Response: LOL! I think you over read that a little bit. He was just seducing her. He'd just found out the girl of his dreams had liked him all along. It was one of those "I'm on top of the world" moments. And Lily didn't like him for his maturity, since she'd liked him all along and for most of the time he was immature. Abusive relationship? Hardly. He loves her too. You can't predict their future marriage because James is merely proud of himself in one scene.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 08/15/06 12:22
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Oooh, I so would have hit him if he'd have used those last two lines on me. Don't ask how I know.

That was great really, I can relate to it it ways that I will not even get into, but I have to say that I really hated that ending. No offense meant whatsoever, but it was just like... Wow, this has a long explaination.

See, I see this as Lily has liked James and still does, but she won't admit it, probably not even to herself. She had an excuse to hate that she was falling for him before because he was a jerk, but now he's a more pleasant person. So the ball is in Lily's court now, unfortunately for her, as it would seem ay the moent. She likes James, people are starting to realize that she does, and she really had no excuse to pretend that she doesn't care for him anymore. So James corners her since he knows she's fallen for him, going back to his arrogant, jerk-y-ness. His arrogance was something he had grown out of (which was majorly for the better), but now he's falling back into that habit? And Lily just allows him to?? James is telling her how great he is, essentially "Oh, you worship me too... just like everybody else. You love me because I'm awesome." And Lily just melts. Probably still somewhat unwillingly, but she just melts into his arms. Maybe she has fallen for him, which is fine, but now she just shrinks back. Meek little Lily. Arrogant jerk Potter. And these people fall in love and are married without an abusive relationship??? I'm just not seeing it. But then again, that's just me. Maybe you're trying to show that James was a jerk to Lily and always was a jerk to her?? I dunno. But that's the signal I'm getting.

-Chris

Author's Response: Okay, I didn't read this one because you told me not to. =D

Reviewer: Teary Loser
Date: 08/13/06 21:34
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

That was great! Love each word and paragraph. Well done!!

Author's Response: Oooh! That means a lot! Most people just like the little sappiness at the end. But YOU like EVER part. =D This makes me a happy writer. I am appreciated.

Reviewer: thepatronus_n_thecharm
Date: 08/12/06 11:20
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: =D Shucks! Okay, I will. Actually, it's queque right now, and I'm surprised it's not validated already.

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 08/10/06 16:59
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

This was great, as were you other stories. I'm adding you (and them) to favorites!

Author's Response: :O You've just made my day! Yay! I'm not kidding. Probably, the best news I've had all day was that review. Isn't that sad? I'm just so happy you liked it. *party dances*

Reviewer: sara_potter
Date: 08/07/06 7:27
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

yyay.clap clap

Author's Response: *bows*

Reviewer: hogwartsgirlhg
Date: 08/05/06 11:28
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

omg u have to write more

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the response. I have written more, and I'll try to post it soon.

Reviewer: Midnight Flower
Date: 08/04/06 14:33
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

I totally loved it! I love this story the best out of all you've written.I'm so thankful you brought back the cocky James in the end.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your opinion, and I thank you even more for reviewing it to tell me so. That always makes my day. It's also my favorite out of all my stories.

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 08/04/06 12:51
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

My tummys tingly!! And I dont like James as not a marauder. OOC. But.....he reverted back to his old way! yay!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I had to have our lovable Marauder James come back, or otherwise, I might have cried. James is perfect the way he is. Lily's stupid to ask him to change. That's the second reason I don't like her. And the first is she's James' wife.

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 08/03/06 17:14
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

I love it! Is there going to be another chapter? I hope so. I love your whole idea and it is well written. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you. I just realized I'd put this as uncompleted when it kind of is. I don't have an idea for another chapter, so I'm going to change it sorry. I'm uninspired for a second chapter.

Reviewer: Werewolf Bandit
Date: 08/03/06 9:47
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

This was your best story yet and I hope you continue to do more. You have so much talent. I can't wait to see it develop even more. You are absolutely amazing! I loved it even though I am not to big on romance this one was great. I keep having it fun through my mind! lol. Till your next strory, Werewolf Bandit

Author's Response: It runs through your mind? Thanks. That's awesome. That means I did what I wanted to.

Reviewer: ThisLullaby
Date: 08/02/06 19:47
Chapter: How He Knew - An Encounter Between James and Lily

Aww, I loved it. It was adorable. It was brilliant!

Author's Response: Adorable? Well, yeah. I mean, it was James Potter. Adorable is understating it. James is friggin' hot.

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