Brillant! Eagerly awaiting next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

wow! this is extremely good... i love it. i can't wait for the next update...its fascinating. (:

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Working on Chapter 3 now!

Hi Gryfinnpuff! Have we met in the Chamber of Secrets? I believe I read a great editorial by you!
Anyway - what a fascinating story you have started! I am hooked - I can't wait to find out what is in the Hall of Love. You have done a wonderful job describing the Department of Mysteries, and especially this Hall. Arthur is very much in character - this is the first story I've read where he is the protagonist, and you have written him well. I am also quite intrigued by your Unspeakable, Mr. Deogol.
You write very well, very naturally. I seem to be saying that a lot recently but I think I have just been lucky enough to come across some strong stories lately, since this is not always the case. ;)But you definetly have a strong sense of style, and your plot is wonderfully original!
I hope that Arthur finds what he is looking for in the Hall of Love. I imagine it will be a life-changing experience for him. Please don't make him suffer too much. ;)
Again - great start, I look forward to following this story! Good luck in the HHWP challenge!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Hey Gina! Yes, I did write an editorial about the importance of the phoenix. This was a great review, by the way! I don't know what made me choose Mr. Weasley, but he's working out lovely so far =) His experience will be difficult, but I'm a silver lining type of person so he'll get through it. Thanks so much for reviewing and your comments!