Brillant! Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm intrigued. This is intense, disturbing, and very interesting.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Intense, disturbing, and interesting are three things I always shoot for in my stories ;)
wow! this is extremely good... i love it. i can't wait for the next update...its fascinating. (:
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Working on Chapter 3 now!
Oh! I wish we could edit reviews - I am so sorry I spelled your name wrong! But at leat now I can tell you how much I also like the banner that goes with this story, its beautiful. :)
Author's Response: Haha, to be honest I didn't even notice! And yes, the banner is fantastic! Purplemage did a great job on it.
Hi Gryfinnpuff! Have we met in the Chamber of Secrets? I believe I read a great editorial by you!
Anyway - what a fascinating story you have started! I am hooked - I can't wait to find out what is in the Hall of Love. You have done a wonderful job describing the Department of Mysteries, and especially this Hall. Arthur is very much in character - this is the first story I've read where he is the protagonist, and you have written him well. I am also quite intrigued by your Unspeakable, Mr. Deogol.
You write very well, very naturally. I seem to be saying that a lot recently but I think I have just been lucky enough to come across some strong stories lately, since this is not always the case. ;)But you definetly have a strong sense of style, and your plot is wonderfully original!
I hope that Arthur finds what he is looking for in the Hall of Love. I imagine it will be a life-changing experience for him. Please don't make him suffer too much. ;)
Again - great start, I look forward to following this story! Good luck in the HHWP challenge!! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: Hey Gina! Yes, I did write an editorial about the importance of the phoenix. This was a great review, by the way! I don't know what made me choose Mr. Weasley, but he's working out lovely so far =) His experience will be difficult, but I'm a silver lining type of person so he'll get through it. Thanks so much for reviewing and your comments!
Excellent! This was SOOOO well written! It was amazing! Brilliant! INCREDIBLE! I can't wait till the next chapter gets validated! I want to know what's in The Hall of Love!!! And I love to see Arthur acting so brave and stuff!! I don't know how brave I'd be in that situation...though, I would probably do it simply just for my love for the trio!!! And I guess that's why Arthur's doing it! Anyway, great, great chapter and I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Hooray! First review! Thanks Chloe! I'm glad you liked it =) This idea came to me out of nowhere, I'm glad it's working out so well. Next chapter will hopefully be up soon (there should only be three chapters, maybe four total)!