Reviewer: Dagmar Beck
Date: 10/09/09 2:17
Chapter: The Unspeakable

that you have aknowlecged that love can be both terrorifing and dangerous as well as the classic concepts is refreshing

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 07/03/08 1:52
Chapter: Hope

good story but it doesn't feel as if it is finnished. i think you should write a sequel because i really want to know if it worked. did it?

Reviewer: petdoc
Date: 03/29/08 19:16
Chapter: Hope

What an interesting twist on Dumbledore's conviction that love conquers all. Very nice to see Mr. Weasley in the limelight too. Plus I'm a sucker for a happy ending and this story leaves you with the feeling that all will be well-no matter what. Thank you for an excellent read.

Reviewer: xXRon_luverXx
Date: 12/16/07 21:59
Chapter: Hope

i really enjoyed it!!!
i think you need to make an epilogue
but thats just my personal opinion
it was a good ending anyways
does it work? do they wake up?
what happens after if they do?

all questions i desperatly
want the answers too
answers that you could answer!!!!
lol so.... yeah
good job btw

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 12/10/07 0:57
Chapter: Hope

This made me cry. it was beautiful.

Reviewer: mia2223
Date: 11/16/07 6:20
Chapter: The Unspeakable


Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 11/05/07 13:06
Chapter: Hope

What a wonderful story! Though quite sad, it was very happy as well. I loved it! The emotion (mainly love) was very strong; this deserved a Quickie!~


Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 11/05/07 12:55
Chapter: The Golden Day

Aw, what a sweet chapter! I loved how Ron asked Hermione to marry him--it seemed very in-character ;) Can't wait to finish this wonderful story! *makes a Christmahanuwanzadan toast*~


Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 11/05/07 12:42
Chapter: The Great Battle

Oh, poor, poor Harry, Ron and Hermione! *huggles all of their demented souls* *runs to read next chapter* (I hate this review >.< It is entirely too short.)~


Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 11/05/07 12:32
Chapter: The Hall of Love

If he knew what they were going through, this whole ordeal would be the smallest bit easier. I propose he choose the moment they all became friends! But I'll have to read on and find out...~


Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 11/05/07 12:16
Chapter: The Unspeakable

Congrats on the Quickie (I say that to everyone...=)p)

The Hall of Love...That is an interesting theory! But it makes sense as well. And just what is Mr. Arthur Weasley trying to find?~


Reviewer: phoenixflyerF22
Date: 06/26/07 21:44
Chapter: Hope

That is such a great story!! I had read it before and liked it a lot! today i decided to read it again and now remember how much i liked it! : ) You have such great ideas and transfer them so well into a story! Please write a sequel!!! Do they wake up? Will Harry and Ginny get together? A prequel would be cool too : )

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 06/18/07 17:51
Chapter: Hope

aaaahhhhhh! cliff-hangers are unbearable enough at the end of chapters, its down-right spiteful to put one at the end of a story. please give us a sequel, the story needs closure.

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 06/18/07 17:51
Chapter: Hope

aaaahhhhhh! cliff-hangers are unbearable enough at the end of chapters, its down-right spiteful to put one at the end of a story. please give us a sequel, the story needs closure.

Reviewer: teelcj
Date: 05/27/07 15:53
Chapter: The Golden Day

Wow. I haven't even finished this story, and I'm already crying. You have a way with words that draws the reader into the story completely. I was lost in the words, in the moment. I could almost hear Ron, Hermmione, Harry, and Arthur saying these things, I could feel what they were feeling. Thank you for being so sensetive to the characters AND to the readers.
Your grammar and syntax are wonderful, and I haven't found a punctuation error yet!
I can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you, it's a joy to read these.

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 05/20/07 3:22
Chapter: Hope


Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 05/18/07 12:32
Chapter: Hope

To Ash, the Sexy Puffling:

I know I said I was going to read Senses, and I shall, but I wanted to drop you a review for this one first.

Firstly, I’m not going to nitpick the small errors I found, but I will say that you should at least think of getting a beta *hugs*

On to the rest. My first reaction, upon finishing this (which I did on my lunch break, by the way) was annoyance. How could you end it there? How could you possibly end that story there? What happened to Ron and Hermione and Harry? Why did you do this?

And, as my emotions let go and thoughts, logical, real thoughts, took over, I understood. On many levels, the story wasn’t about Ron, Hermione and Harry at all. It was about Arthur Weasley and it was about love. Not about saving the ‘Golden Trio’, but about discovering what love and happiness are truly about.

Because it is true. Love isn’t about a great, shining moment. Love is the small, perfect days, one after another, like pearls on a string. Happiness is not one moment, but many moments blended together.

As my logical thoughts took over, I realized just how lovely this story really was. It doesn’t need a sequel to close out the story, because the story was never about Harry and friends – it was about love. An excellent job.


Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 05/17/07 17:05
Chapter: Hope

That was a cool story do they wake up or not.

Reviewer: summerfun37
Date: 05/10/07 16:01
Chapter: Hope

What happens?? Do they get better? Is there a sequel? (Not that I've become obsessed in the 30 minutes since I discovered the story). Great story, by the way!


Reviewer: Jennifer M
Date: 04/17/07 19:49
Chapter: The Unspeakable

Great story! I hope there is a sequel.

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