hey! the song went along perfectly w/ the stroy. they way u put it all together was great! thats my fve song so it made it even better, but i gotta kestion.... Who the hell is hanna?
Author's Response: well, hannah arden is an original character.. ^_^ i have a fanfic about them that's not one-shot. it's my other work -- with a sequel "Twisted Fate". i hope i can upload them soon..if you want you can read them both at harrypotterfanfiction.com or u can email me so i can send it to you. ^_^
hey! the song went along perfectly w/ the stroy. they way u put it all together was great! thats my fve song so it made it even better, but i gotta kestion.... Who the hell is hanna?
hey! the song went along perfectly w/ the stroy. they way u put it all together was great! thats my fve song so it made it even better, but i gotta kestion.... Who the hell is hanna?
wait, does that mean that Draco killed Harry and Ron and Seamus and Dean???? Him and Hannah are the best couple i have ever seen. EVER!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: er...actually, no. he (draco) just sort of knocked them out. thank you! ^_^ i'm really glad you like them. try twisted fate; it's a continuation of you're my reason. ^_^
i love it. i love all your Draco and HAnnah stories and I love the personality twists you gave them. Wow. That was amazing...*10*
ok i definately and totally one hundred percent agree with everything LightSpinner said. and yes that was a very evil thing for harry to do. but hey, its fiction, right?
Not buying that Harry does something evil like that, but I can't deny the way you wrote it with the song was good. Harry is NOT evil. Draco IS evil.
i loved the effect you put in it with the lyrics-very original tho i had a hard time trying-dont laugh-to follow the song and read the story lol keep going sista! i really on the edge!!!!!
NOOOOO harry is NOT evil!!!!!!! fix it and hannah/draco is a good ship!!!
I liked the writing, the idea, the romance. It was really heartfelt... but I'm sorry, I can't see Harry doing something like that, even if he and Draco are worst enemies. Any other guy, but not Harry. Otherwise, great job!
lOVED IT PLEASE R&R MY STORY CALLED tHE FORGOTTEN DAUGHTER!!!!!!
pretty good, I don't really think Harry would do that to Draco's girlfriend, if she wasn't involved though, otherwise, a different idea, sort of "scary" but good
Creepy. Good. Angsty. But creepy is staying in the front of my mind. That was definitely a neat and different idea, in particularly for a one-shot, and you pulled it off very well.
Freakin' kool! definately a twist in the personalities, but it was good... i really like the way you incorperated in the lyrics...i love that song!
i think its really good! definitely doesnt seem like something harry would do,so far. but maybe it'll make more sense why harry did that later on.
love this story!! well written! please review my stories! Texas Witch and A Vampire's Desire both in Harry and Other. much appriciation! thanx! :)
love this story!! well written! please review my stories! Texas Witch and A Vampire's Desire both in Harry and Other. much appriciation! thanx! :)
