Reviews For When We Were Gods
Reviewer: Sekhmet
Date: 07/28/06 15:53
Chapter: Prologue

I am terribly excited about this story you have cooking here. I LOVE ancient egypt. I have a fair amount of knowledge of the mythology. I am fascinated to see what you are going to do with it.

I love the way you set the stage for this historical fic. Your descriptions were so vivid. Your beginning is wonderful!

Author's Response: Hehe I think my beginning is the best chapter of the entire story xD Thanks though!

Reviewer: 90glassslippers
Date: 07/24/06 16:14
Chapter: Prologue

Hmmm... Intriging

Reviewer: sayiansirius
Date: 07/23/06 13:33
Chapter: Prologue

Wow this was very good Beth. The style of writing is good but I had to read a couple sentences over because I've never read a fic like this before. I like you wrote everything. The Death Eater's fear, Bellatrix showing "human" emotions. The only thing I actually wanted to see was Lucius...i'm guessing you'll introduce him later?

And if I'm not mistaken, because I still can't quite understand your summary, is this gonna be about Voldemort trying to take over?

I'll definately keep reading!

Author's Response: Why thank you! Truth be told, I think this is the best chapter out of the entire story...This is only a prologue that leads into the story.

No Lucius, I'm afraid.

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