I am terribly excited about this story you have cooking here. I LOVE ancient egypt. I have a fair amount of knowledge of the mythology. I am fascinated to see what you are going to do with it.
I love the way you set the stage for this historical fic. Your descriptions were so vivid. Your beginning is wonderful!
Author's Response: Hehe I think my beginning is the best chapter of the entire story xD Thanks though!
Wow this was very good Beth. The style of writing is good but I had to read a couple sentences over because I've never read a fic like this before. I like you wrote everything. The Death Eater's fear, Bellatrix showing "human" emotions. The only thing I actually wanted to see was Lucius...i'm guessing you'll introduce him later?
And if I'm not mistaken, because I still can't quite understand your summary, is this gonna be about Voldemort trying to take over?
I'll definately keep reading!
Author's Response: Why thank you! Truth be told, I think this is the best chapter out of the entire story...This is only a prologue that leads into the story.
No Lucius, I'm afraid.
Thanks for your review!