Reviews For Tawfiq's Tale
Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 09/09/06 21:22
Chapter: Tawfiq's Tale

Very, very different!! But good!! For one thing, the names are really cool! Also, his thought's make sense, and his animal insticts (e.g. the hunger) are combined well with humanesque qualities (e.g. the love of Mierit and the wish for revenge). This story really shows a new side to acromantulas...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was hoping people would like it. :) The names are mostly Arabic and African, I found them on my favorite names website. I really like those kinds of names, and I liked them as Acromantula names as well. Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Argelfraster
Date: 09/07/06 3:28
Chapter: Tawfiq's Tale

Very cool! The acromantula's point of view is fascinating...nice how you threw in the acromantula that Cedric and Harry met in the maze. Nice job, it was very well written!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 08/06/06 10:23
Chapter: Tawfiq's Tale

This is really an amazing story. I really like how you told it from the viewpoint of the spiders instead of a standard human POV. It was a great idea, and you follow through with it well by writing it excellentally. Great job!

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! After the big stink I made about it, I don't like it the way I used to, but in time I'll get over it. I'm glad someone else likes it. :)

Reviewer: grim reaper
Date: 07/21/06 12:23
Chapter: Tawfiq's Tale


Author's Response: I think you mean 'interesting'. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 07/21/06 11:58
Chapter: Tawfiq's Tale

hey, this was an interesting story...i liked it. i never thought that the acromantulas would want to get harry so badly. it was a very good story, good idea and well-written. good job :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

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