Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/25/06 19:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think your poem here is well done (and-- bonus points-- correct.) Super-duper. I was totally drawn into Snape's narrative. It was so delightfully... Snape-y! Bravo.

My only criticism-- the phrase 'until need be' in the third to last stanza has been used incorrectly. It needs an object. Its a pity since it fits in so perfectly.

More, more, more!

Pax.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 07/21/06 22:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good, but I still think Snape is evil.

Author's Response: Yeah, he probably is but what if he weren't?

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/21/06 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmm...I don't know...Snape just...ugh! Nice job...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks.

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