Reviews For Broken and Scarred
Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/01/06 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was sad but well written. it kinda made me see bella in a different way, other than the evil death eater she is portrayed as in the books.

Author's Response: I'm very glad it made you see Bella in a different way. That was my goal. I'm also glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: marry_me_rupert
Date: 07/28/06 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good. A little wrong, but good...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 07/28/06 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ahhh! See, that's the kind of thing that makes me cry. It was beautiful as usual, and about our favorite Death Eater!!! You really like Bellatrix/Lucius don't you? Well, you have your opinions and I have mine... viva la difference. This was amazing and once again, going on my favorites!

Author's Response: Wow! I actually wondered how you would respond to this. I know that you are a huge fan of Bella/Rodolphus, and this story clearly doesn't support that.

Anyway, yes, I am completely obsessed with Bella/Lucius. I couldn't imagine writing them in love with anyone else. I just fell in love with the pairing.

So, thank you for reviewing again. And I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, despite our different ships of choice.

Reviewer: queenofdarkness111
Date: 07/27/06 9:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow! dats sure a different side of bellatrix but da way she critisized him in H BP .......

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And, yes, I suppose Bella was critizing Lucius in HBP, but there could be numerous reasons for it. If Bella and Lucius did have a relationship, it would be nothing if not complicated. :D

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/27/06 5:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was so sad! it gives a great insight into bella's life and helps explain why she is so twisted in later life. i loved it. 10/10

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 07/27/06 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have to say that I was captivated by the mysterious box at first, and knew it contained the memories of a former lover of Bellatrix's. =]
I never imagined it would be Lucius.
It did seem a tad OOC.
However, you truly humanized Bellatrix and did a great job at it.
You manage to bring to light what could possibly have been a different side of Bellatrix: secretly in love with Lucius, abused by her husband, etc.
It does bother me that in canon books she's so "evil" and "cold" but I would assume it's because of her abuse, and Azkaban hardened her.
She's a truly mysterious character to me.
Good job!

Author's Response: See below :)

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 07/27/06 0:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have to say that I was captivated by the mysterious box at first, and knew it contained the memories of a former lover of Bellatrix's. =]
I never imagined it would be Lucius.
It did seem a tad OOC.
However, you truly humanized Bellatrix and did a great job at it.
You manage to bring to light what could possibly have been a different side of Bellatrix: secretly in love with Lucius, abused by her husband, etc.
It does bother me that in canon books she's so "evil" and "cold" but I would assume it's because of her abuse, and Azkaban hardened her.
She's a truly mysterious character to me.
Good job!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

I am in love with the idea of Bella of Lucius. It just came to me one night. It started as a very short one-shot fic, which ended up being a two-part fic. And the ship has really stuck with me. It's now the only way I can imagine either of them. It's also a huge part of a chaptered fic I am outlining.

As for it being OOC, yeah, I write Bella and Lucius, and most other "dark" characters somewhat different from the HP books. I like to explore the sides of them that we don't see in the books.

Anyway, I'm glad that you liked my humanized version of Bella. I always write her that way. I just don't think she is really the cold horrible person we see in the books.

So thanks again for reviewing. It is very much appreciated!

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 07/26/06 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well, it is definitely different. I can't see Bellatrix putting up with that from anyone but Voldemort. By the way, it is Rodolphus, not Rodulphus. Some of the spelling errors and wrong word choices were a bit distracting. Well written, but I honestly think this would be more along the lines of how Lucius would treat Narcissa than Rodolphus and Bellatrix.

Author's Response: Well, thank you for reviewing, and pointing out errors. I can't believe I spelled his name wrong! It's all fixed now. Apparently, it was spelled wrong 30 times! Very sorry about that. I will also do another proof-read in the near future to look into word choice.

As for Bella not taking that. I think it's more possible than you think. I think she is loyal to people in ways that we haven't seen in the books, and I think she would do whatever was necessary to avoid hurting her baby sister.

And I don't think Lucius would be violent with his family. I just don't see him that way.

Anyway, thank you again for reviewing. And special thanks for pointing out errors. I like to get these things fixed.

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/26/06 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow...um...I don't know...I just don't think Bella would tolerate that...wow...this is very well written, though...nice job...

I have one question though: "The attic was empty expect for a small box beside her." Did you mean "except" in that sentence?

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love reviews. *does happy review dance*

Well it doesn't seem likely that any woman would really want to tolerate that, but what you have to remember about Bella is her insane loyalty and dedication. In her mind, it's all about protecting Narcissa, and that makes whatever happens to her worth while.

And yes, I did mean "except" in that sentence. I will fix it right away. Thank you for pointing it out, and thanks again for the review!

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