Reviews For Starlight Dreams
Reviewer: axelvaz
Date: 08/01/06 16:07
Chapter: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 07/31/06 16:04
Chapter: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

It's so great to see the start of something new! I can't wait to see where you go with this, and I'm sure that I'll enjoy it just as much as your other pieces!

Author's Response: Hi, Narwen3 :) I'm very excited, too! Second chapter is back from my beta and I just got some fresh ideas that I can't wait to show you :) Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: Phoenix3
Date: 07/30/06 21:44
Chapter: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

I just l o v e the way you write. The details you choose to incorporate, the way you present the characters, the stories themselves and how the finished work always has an underlying confidence. It's a cohesive force that is integral but seems to exist effortlessly, like strong/weak forces in atomic nuclei. Why am I talking about science during the summer, and in relation with writing? I don't know, it must mean I really appreciate your writing. Gosh.

But really, I'm very excited--and satisfied. Yes all my IMpatient waiting was worth it--this opening chapter definitely promises a great story to follow--and I must say with your most developed style yet. And I'm in the dedicatory! Woo! I love your writing, and I like telling you how much I love it just as much, I'm just glad it makes you happy =).

Again, REALLY excited-- Harry has decided to shut off his emotions? Oooo I sense a really great plot, like Harry HELLO how many times does Dumbledore have to tell you it's your ability to love that makes you special! Goodness gracious what a thick-head. Just random, although I didn't overwhelmingly like OotP, I like where it ended, what Harry was left with. There was suh great promise, but I don't know the JKR really satisfied me with HBP. So, I'm even more ecstatic that you chose to start up after book 5! I am so waiting impatiently yet again for chapter 2.

I will always be a hyper-excited fan, willing to nit-pick as needed (oh the first sentence of paragraph 9 seems to have had a mishap) and praise you to the stars (which you seem to like as inspirations, metaphors, descriptive pretty lights, general backdrops).

Author's Response: Hi, Phoenix3 =D Well, I l o v e your reviews, so we are even :) Aw, thank you very much! I'm glad you think there's that cohesive force unifying all those things. Really kind words! Hahah, don't worry. A little bit of science has never killed anyone, right? (Wrong! It has 0.o but this is not the point :) ).

I'm very relieved that you think it was worth the wait! I know not much happens in the this first chapters, but that's because it's introductory, and all that :) Next chapter will give us a peek into the Weasleys and Hermione's life, but I won't say more :)

Ah, yes, his emotions will play a part in the story. However, I've seen the same argument used many, many times in fanfiction. Hopefully, you'll find my way original >D And I agree with you: OotP leaves a lot of doors open. Yet, I think HBP ended, too, in the right place. I couldn't imagine the book going too long after Dumbledore's death :/ Well, this story was planned before HBP, and I considered including book 6 later, but finally I opted against :) There are so many things planned for year 6 that I just couldn't leave it out :D

Ah, and I will always be hyper-thankful writer for having reviewers like yourself :) Thank you very, very much for reviewing! Ah, stars... I don't even know how to find the constellations in a starry night :/ However, you are right: I do use them as inspiration, even more in this story (hence the title). There will be an important link throughout the story :) but again, I can't say more! Again, thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/30/06 11:55
Chapter: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

You have me very intrigued. I love H/G stories. How did the picture end up in the kitchen? hmmm Harry can't shut himself off from his emotions-hopefully Ginny will help him see that. I am eagerly looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi, Ginzig :) I'm glad you are intrigued, because I think that the opening chapter reverberates greatly on whether people will read your story or not :) Oh, yes, he shouldn't, but you know how stubborn Harry can be. As you said, hopefully someone will help him see the light ;) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 07/30/06 10:49
Chapter: Old Wounds, New Beginnings

im the first reviewer!! yay!! I'm curious,,its a cute idea and i wanna follow the story as it progresses...keep going!

Author's Response: Hi! Ah, I'm so happy that the story it's finally up :) I'm glad you liked it, and I hope to see you around in the next chapters!

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