Lol great chapter loved the idea of the one shot thanks it was great best bit "Wanna tattoo 'I love Dumbledore' across Wormtail's chest and leave him naked in Voldy's headquarters?" God how did u come up with that its sooo random lol definetly 10/10
Great Chapter liked the idea of watching Harry's life go by aswell anyways 10/10
Sweet story, I love all the humor and the thinking behind the story, like Crookshanks and the way that they can watch over Harry forever. Wish it wasn't finished...great story, I have to read the sequel!
I absolutely loved it. The way you showed James and Lily watching over Harry was really moving, and you expressed the grief of all the characters really well. Well done :D
This was a really good read. I like how you compliment what JKR set for the characters. Very naturally. Thumbs up!
So unfair! Sirius shouldnt have died, but your style of writing has b rought him back t life! Im on the chapter 2 now!!
AMAZING
That was simply outstanding. You to have a creative ginx for writing. I hope you continue writing for a long time and keep me update while doing so!
That was bloody briliant! 3 thumbs up!
Oh I love you for writing this! Brilliant! And through my tears, I laughed at the thought of Wormtail lying naked in Voldemorts headquaters with I love Dumbledore tattoed on his chest. THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!! 10/10
Beautiful, just beautiful. It's so unfair, why can't I write like this? The Marauders ride again - I'm going to cry. Having them see OOTP from their point of view was ingenious.
once again, amazing story! i really admire the way you write, and you should really consider writing professionally :-)...i love how your stories don't interfere with the books, and i love the H/G shipping too!
amazing story so far, i really enjoy how you write...well, i'm off to read chapter two!
That was so great! I was tearing up at the part with Moony, and that's saying somehting, because I never cry at sad things. Anyways, that was a great fic and you should be proud that you made Quira cry! lol. ~Quira
that was really awsome! i really hope that this isnt a one shot. this is a totally awsome story and i hope that u update soon.
i am sitting here in tears...thank you so much
wow you are so talented, i love how you tie in things with the books, those are the best fanfics cuz your like oh that makes sense! haha hope to read more of your stuff soon!
Oh good good good. Glad to hear there's another chapter. It's just such a different original story. This chapter had me reaching for the kleenex though. It was so sad; but excellently written!
Normally my reviews are very short and simple. But as I said it to you once when you wrote "A Push in the right direction": Your writing skills are impressive, the way in which you write is unique and enviable, you have the power and the magic that any writer wishes. Its amazing how your Fanfics are so different to others, because you respect the real story, respect the essence of every character and the plot. You must continue writing and only I still have to say to you that you are my favorite author of Fanfics. Congratulations. I expect to continue reading your work and to see like day after day you improve more. Keep writing. Galleta (I sorry if I have bad spelling and grammar, but English is not my mother language)
