Very well written. You make the idea of James, Lily and Sirius helping Harry from beyond the veil sound very believable.
lol i really liked it! but i feel so bad for moony!
awesome! i love how it ties in with the real harry potter books and everything!!
nice nice ..............i really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!
i laughed through all of this with tears in my eyes
it's a great story but it looks like you've given up on it
that sux, u should pick it up again
In the story, James can transform into a stag, not a buck. Great chapter, though.
Wonderful. Absolutely gobsmacking!
~Moony
Nice idea i really like it, but everything is happening way too fast. This whole dead interfering with hte living thing is cool but it kinda cheats harry out of his more brilliant feats... and brain waves... and other stuff...
still it was nicley written 10/10
Awwww . . . . that was so sweet . . . i totally luv Sirius (well DUH!!!!) and this story was just .. . just . . . TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!
~Siriusluvr~
That was a very good story, wish I had found it before I read the next one! Really good!!!!!!!!
*tears come to eyes* Poor Remus! Waaaahhh! But Sirius is unquenchable, even in death.
You made me get all choked up. But this was a really wonderful story.
WHaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! POOOR REMIE!!!! I LOVE YOU REMIE!!!!!!!! your story rocks i love all charicters that are in and mentioned in the story. BUt not snape, Voldesnort (as me and my sister like to call him) and the death eaters) i adorrrrre the flashback. it ROCKS!
Oh poo! i thought i was writing the review for the first chapter. expect another review once i read the chapter!
I loved it! poor Sirius! and i loved the part when Lily said "The Marauders ride again." i almost cried!!!
*Cries heart out for poor Sirius* WHAAAAAAAAAAA! POOR SIRIUSSSSS!! WHAAAAAAAAA! great story by the way, where was i? oh yeah.....WHAAAAAA!!!!
it made me cry but then i laugfhed at the tattoo i love dumbledore on wortails chest and leave him naked in voldys headquaters LOL you're cool write more please (imagine puppy dog eyes opkay ??)
