LOL! That was so funny. If i had to rate this story on how funny it was i'd give you a 9.9 out of 10.
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LOL...this story was so funny. i loved the dumbledore & snape part...it made me laugh out loud!! and i loved when hermione let slip that she loved ron...very well done, i liked it a lot
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review! (I liked the Dumbledore and Snape part too.)
“Ah, Severus, you’re such a horrible murderer, that I somehow managed to remain alive,” said Dumbledore serenely. He seemed to be enjoying himself very much.
This is the funniest thing. I made my mum read it. I like the ending, too-- Harry is so wonderfully lame.
Everyone is marvelously in-character-- fantastic job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Harry mucks everything up. It's impossible for him to be smooth. I'm glad everyone is in character. I decided, if I was going to write something so outrageous, the least I can do is make everyone seem like themselves.
Lol! That was hilarious! My favourite bit was when Dumbledore and Snape were arguing, not exactly canon, but amazingly effective! I take my hat off to you! (At least I would, if I had a hat....:P)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, certainly not canon, but I like to write uncanon because it gives you a bit more freedom. Glad you enjoyed it!
heehee... very funny. I especially liked Harry's line at the end... "your sunburn and hair are so red, people mistook you for a tomato and tried to put you in their salad." classic! And Malfoy, too, was well written. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad Malfoy was well-written, though, as another reviewer pointed out, he was a bit out of character with listening to Hermoine talk. But, I think I made up for it the rest of the time.
This is very exaggerated - a total parody. :) The only issue I had is a slight OOCness of Master Draco Malfoy himself. -fangirl sigh- He wouldn't even talk to Hermione once he saw it was her. He would insult her, and walk away.
So him asking "What do you want?" is a bit friendly for any Slytherin, and especially for him. ;)
Beyond that, it was absolutely hilarious. Harry sounded like a total idiot in the last line, and I loved it. :p
Kumy
P.S. This is your first of three reviews in exchange for your participation in the LilyEvans34 Review Challenge.
Author's Response: Yes, I do suppose he was a bit OOC, but in a parody fic, it makes it slightly more okay. After that, it wasn't as bad. He had Weasel motiavation to help her. =) Oh, I loved that last line so much! Thanks for the review!
That was a funny way to end the story. Nice idea.
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*giggle* that was*giggle* so*giggle* FUNNY! *laugh*
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*giggle* that was*giggle* so*giggle* FUNNY! *laugh*
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The whole Hermione asking Draco's help by floo powder thing was hilarious! In Fact it was all hilarious! Great job :)
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well... Its was okkk.... But not one of my favorites. But maybe thats just me. lol. Dont be offended.
Author's Response: Not at all. Some stories jut aren't for everyone. Unless it's super story, I just don't think there are any out there. :)
Hilarious!
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This is fantastic, absoloutly hillarious and very sweet at the end...this would be the perfect way for Ron and Hermione to get together! 10/10 xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, it would be perfect, but soooo unliekly.
liked it.
I ^--^ It.
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hey i just read it. This is the other persom using potterfan22 the other reveiw was from my frioend chloe i agree with her. It was really funny and i thought the ending was so sweet. Great Job
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Ha! Ha ha ah aha aha ahahahahahaha! ha! ah reversed! ok. Nice story. teeheehee.
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THat is very very funny. Good job.
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