*sighs* I wish I could look into Hermione's mind enough to write a decent journal entry, like these. Splendid job! I am soooo jealous.
i like it... speechless
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I just re-read my story for the first time in years and... I can't believe some of the stuff I wrote.
I really like it- it is soo muck like Hermione to over-analyze stuff like that, and we really don't get a lot of the inner termoil that she must have had in book 5. love it
Author's Response: I think I may have overdone it... :P But thank you very much.. I'm really glad you like it.
Wow! An amazing fic, really, I loved it! I really can imagine Hermione writing all those lines. And her thoughts are Ron are so true! Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. :D
I really liked it
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :D
I liked it. The story gives us and insight into Hermione's thoughts and feelings about Won-Won's...ahem....Ron's relationship with Lavender. I thought it accurately portrayed Hermione's character and her thought's. My only critism is that I thought her journal entry was a bit formal....but then again, that's how Hermione is when she's angry.
Author's Response: Her writing style in this fic is what I thought Hermione would sound like if she had a diary - everyone's opinion is different. Thanks so much for the review.
It ended? Just like that? I would also love for a sequal! I like how your writing style for Hermione is mature, and not very teenish, because she is very mature for her age. I also like how you keep quoting that she has read books on love/dating/guys, which shows that she is in denial.
Crit: It's pretty hard to find something to critisize... maybe take out the "informal, unprofessional" part when describing the contract. I think Hermione might look at that as a big thing.
Overall, great job, and I think a sequal should follow! Or at least another story like this! =)
Author's Response: I'd love to do a sequel if there is some more material I can use from in canon. I'm really glad you liked it, and I'm sorry I couldn't think of a ending that wasn't so sudden. Thanks for reviewing.
true love is for ever and 2 days :)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, sure.
Author's Response: Hm, if you say so.
I really enjoyed seeing how Hermione kind of worked through things when it came to Ron and Lavender. It was a very interesting character analysis, I think. While you did a good job capturing Hermione and how she thinks, her diary seemed more like she was writing a report. Even though she is a very analytical girl and thinks things out to the point of being painful, I don't see her writing in her diary that way. A girls diary is her most treasured posession. It is like another girlfriend you can spill everything to. Poor Hermione doesn't have any real girlfriends, so her diary would receive all of the gushing and anguish that she never shows others. I really think there is a more girly side to Hermione, apart from the analytical side and I would have loved to see that Hermione come through in this one shot. It was really well done and I loved the idea of the contract. The last entry is how I would think Hermione would write in her journal. It is still mature, but she is expressing her feelings, not facts. Great job!
Author's Response: You have a very very good point, and I did consider having Hermione "come out with her girly side" and whatnot but at the same time I didn't want her to sound like other typical girls like Lavender - worrying about her looks and things like that isn't like her. I really picture Hermione writing essay-like diary entries for some reason, though maybe not *all of them* as serious as this one was. For this fic, I wanted to put her through denial of her and Ron's fate, and for that I needed Hermione to try and convince herself that things weren't going to work out between them. Sometimes I find myself doing simular things in my life, so Ithought Hermione could be like that too. Thank you very much for your opinion and I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. The review was really helpful.
Veey good!! I loved how you used details from the sixth book and made it work into a diary.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
It is amazing!!! I loved the diary entries they are so Hermione! Almost written like an essay! Great characterization!!!! I loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. Writing Hermione was challenging but so much fun at the same time!
How sweet! Nicely written, and I thought that the diary entries were very Hermione-ish. (That's good.)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. :)
You should make a sequel. That was very good. I bet your diary is awesome!
Author's Response: I might one day.. if there is more to write about. Thanks for reviewing. :)
i think its great
But i think you should make a longer story on it (not a one-shot), maybe instead of ron/lavender, he could go out with somone else and it could be based in 7th year.
Just an idea, i dont mind if you use it, i wouldnt take it as copyright :-P
Author's Response: I was thinking of that too for another day. Perhaps when the next book comes out I might have more ideas of what I could write based on JKR's last book. Thanks for the review! :)