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Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 12/22/06 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I liked the scheme of it. I think it portrays Ginny's feelings perfectly. I was just wondering what Harry had hated to see.

Excerpt: But your eyes intimidated
Vibrant green
So sure, so strong, burned and hated
What they'd seen.

End.

What did Harry hate to see there? (Sorry if this is a dumb question. I bet the answer is obvious.)

Anyway....

Constructive Criticism
I like this poem, BUT (of course - always a but) I think in some places you could have added more detail. But since this is a poem, that isn't really needed. So that is just my opinion.

Also: Somewhere it says

Reviewer: The9ProchecyKids
Date: 07/22/06 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it!

Reviewer: The9ProchecyKids
Date: 07/22/06 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it!

Reviewer: luna_lupin7
Date: 07/20/06 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it. I thought it was good how you rhymed it, but it didn't sound like that first grade rhyming, it sounded professional. You're really good!

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 07/19/06 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this poem. I liked the pattern, long line, short line. That was cool. I just didn't like the last 4 lines. But besides that it was great.

Author's Response: really? the last 4 lines are my favorite! lol

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 07/17/06 12:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow very nice.
this poem flows very well.
keep up the good work!

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 07/17/06 4:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my god. This is brilliant. I have gooseflesh popping down my arms now. That's meant as a compliment, by the way. It always happens when I'm reading something great.

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