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Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 15:36 · For: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I liked the scheme of it. I think it portrays Ginny's feelings perfectly. I was just wondering what Harry had hated to see.

Excerpt: But your eyes intimidated
Vibrant green
So sure, so strong, burned and hated
What they'd seen.


What did Harry hate to see there? (Sorry if this is a dumb question. I bet the answer is obvious.)


Constructive Criticism
I like this poem, BUT (of course - always a but) I think in some places you could have added more detail. But since this is a poem, that isn't really needed. So that is just my opinion.

Also: Somewhere it says

Name: The9ProchecyKids (Signed) · Date: 07/22/06 20:49 · For: Chapter 1
I like it!

Name: The9ProchecyKids (Signed) · Date: 07/22/06 20:49 · For: Chapter 1
I like it!

Name: luna_lupin7 (Signed) · Date: 07/20/06 15:11 · For: Chapter 1
I liked it. I thought it was good how you rhymed it, but it didn't sound like that first grade rhyming, it sounded professional. You're really good!

Name: hufflepuffgal (Signed) · Date: 07/19/06 15:15 · For: Chapter 1
I really liked this poem. I liked the pattern, long line, short line. That was cool. I just didn't like the last 4 lines. But besides that it was great.

Author's Response: really? the last 4 lines are my favorite! lol

Name: comewhatmay (Signed) · Date: 07/17/06 12:34 · For: Chapter 1
wow very nice.
this poem flows very well.
keep up the good work!

Name: x_lily_evans_x (Signed) · Date: 07/17/06 4:00 · For: Chapter 1
Oh my god. This is brilliant. I have gooseflesh popping down my arms now. That's meant as a compliment, by the way. It always happens when I'm reading something great.

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