Reviews For Lily's Fancy
Reviewer: hpfreak94
Date: 08/09/06 19:53
Chapter: Chapter Two

Love it Love it Love it

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 08/09/06 19:33
Chapter: Chapter Two

wow, completely intense! both chapters, and might i suggest you make the rating a 6th-7th year. mainly for the firsst chapter, and im not sure where your taking this, bu it seems like it might be a bit too "steamy" for 3rd-5th years. i dont know, just a sugestion. but i really like this, update soon.

Author's Response: Hmm. I've been contemplating whether or not to up the rating. I think I just might do that. Thanx for the review! :)

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 08/09/06 18:18
Chapter: Chapter Two

geez all this and they havn't even gotten off the train!! update uber soon i can't wait to see what's next! :D

Reviewer: sarcastic hp lover
Date: 08/09/06 18:15
Chapter: Chapter One

Interesting definatley interesting.I liked the kiss but the slap i liked a little more because that was an even larger conflict.continue please.

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 08/09/06 17:56
Chapter: Chapter Two

awe, poor james

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/09/06 17:34
Chapter: Chapter One

Wow, that was really good. I like how you described her parents, and I totally freaked out when I read the name Aurora because I love that name. I freaked out even more when I saw Maddie. I was like, "Cool!" I just wanted to point out to you that when Rory hugs Lily, you have a spelling error. "Her train of thought was suddenly broken when she realized she couldn’t breath...." It should say "breathe." Other than that, great story!!

Author's Response: Thanx for the notice. I'm glad you like my story. I didn't think anyone would. :)

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/09/06 17:05
Chapter: Chapter Two

wow. lily is violent

Reviewer: SecretEmeraldLily
Date: 07/24/06 10:12
Chapter: Chapter One

Wow, Lily seems a little fierce huh? Sounds like somebody doesn't want to admit feelings for James, eh? Lol, great story, keep up the good writing ^.^

Reviewer: omg i love sirius
Date: 07/23/06 19:16
Chapter: Chapter One

wooow that kissy bit made me lose my breath for a bit lol. and what a good start to it as well...'when have i ever followed the rules?' also i loved the detail in the rest of it too. u absolutely have to update this soon!!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/23/06 13:38
Chapter: Chapter One

i didn't realize that was the only chapter absolutley loved it that kiss caught me off guard! update soon!! :D

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/23/06 13:37
Chapter: Chapter One

OMG!!!! that was awesome!

Reviewer: sweet4potter
Date: 07/21/06 23:15
Chapter: Chapter One

fantastic! can't wait for the rest of the story!

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 07/21/06 16:38
Chapter: Chapter One

i cant wait for another chapter

Reviewer: Pride3
Date: 07/21/06 12:24
Chapter: Chapter One

It was good. I really liked it. Hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pride3
Date: 07/21/06 12:23
Chapter: Chapter One

It was good. I really liked it. Hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 07/21/06 10:05
Chapter: Chapter One

First review for first story! It was very good.

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