wow, completely intense! both chapters, and might i suggest you make the rating a 6th-7th year. mainly for the firsst chapter, and im not sure where your taking this, bu it seems like it might be a bit too "steamy" for 3rd-5th years. i dont know, just a sugestion. but i really like this, update soon.

Author's Response: Hmm. I've been contemplating whether or not to up the rating. I think I just might do that. Thanx for the review! :)

Interesting definatley interesting.I liked the kiss but the slap i liked a little more because that was an even larger conflict.continue please.

Wow, that was really good. I like how you described her parents, and I totally freaked out when I read the name Aurora because I love that name. I freaked out even more when I saw Maddie. I was like, "Cool!" I just wanted to point out to you that when Rory hugs Lily, you have a spelling error. "Her train of thought was suddenly broken when she realized she couldn’t breath...." It should say "breathe." Other than that, great story!!

Author's Response: Thanx for the notice. I'm glad you like my story. I didn't think anyone would. :)

Wow, Lily seems a little fierce huh? Sounds like somebody doesn't want to admit feelings for James, eh? Lol, great story, keep up the good writing ^.^

i didn't realize that was the only chapter absolutley loved it that kiss caught me off guard! update soon!! :D

fantastic! can't wait for the rest of the story!

It was good. I really liked it. Hurry with the next chapter!

First review for first story! It was very good.