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Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:33 · For: Chapter 15: Fever
Uhoh That does not sound too good! Terrific chapter

Author's Response: Stewing in his own juices is not good for such a pessimist.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:32 · For: Chapter 14: Silver Linings
Great chapter :)

Author's Response: :)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:28 · For: Chapter 13: Snape's Worst Week
Ooooo, interesting ending!

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:15 · For: Chapter 12: Sensibility
Nice little heart to heart there!

Author's Response: :)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:12 · For: Chapter 11: Abandon
Awwww, that is sweet!

Author's Response: hee hee. Our Sev can be such the charmer when he tries.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:10 · For: Chapter 10: Reckoning
Very nicely written conversation!

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:08 · For: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me
Amazing chapter! But it seems Snape almost hit the nail on the head with his ploy :)

Author's Response: Heh, well, Snape's not one to do things halfway...


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:04 · For: Chapter 8: The Potions Master
Terrific chapter! Love this fan fic :)

Author's Response: Yay!


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 9:02 · For: Chapter 7: Distillations
Wow, I have to say Snape drunk like that was a surprise! Well written though

Author's Response: I think Hermione thought so, too.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:56 · For: Chapter 6: The First Brick Crumbles
Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: :)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:50 · For: Chapter 5: The Great Escape
Haha! Extremely funny at the end. Great humor!

Author's Response: *bows* This is one of my favorite things I've ever written.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:41 · For: Chapter 4: Compound Interest
Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: :)


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:38 · For: Chapter 3: Old Habits Die Hard
Hermione does not seem to get intimidated too quickly which is a good thing when dealing with Snape!!! :) Good chapter

Author's Response: No doubt! He's not one for the weak of heart.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:20 · For: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
Pretty funny chapter! :P

Author's Response: The humor has yet to come, trust me.


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 8:01 · For: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
Intrigueing chapter! Interesting deal too!

Author's Response: :)


Name: leahsm2 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/07 15:56 · For: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me
Your story is one of my favorites. I like the way Snape and Hermione are attracted to each other, and made to seem so attractive, even if to the outside world (as you make so pinfully obvious in other portions) they may not be.
""Legilimens." He plunged into her consciousness without his usual delicacy, quickly pilfering through deep memories, searching for specific content." I like how this sets the reader up for what will happen later in the chapter, showing Snape as a man in a mission.

"Snape could see it in her eyes; mere defiance was replaced by desperate horror, the indignant rage by a primal instinct for self-preservation. He sneered, pulling her head back by her long, thick hair as he reached into the front of his robes with his other hand. He was ready; he took hold of the waistband of her woolen tights and yanked downward--

--a sensation of falling through darkness--"

This was especially evocative of feeling the Occlumens finally being able to stop the Legilimens.

" "I don't deny it, young lady," he said softly. "But my hands are clean, and I stayed out of your dreams." " I liked this part alot, too, especially since he thought (hoped?) he'd find himself in her dreams.


I liked how Snape is fighting himself trying to push Hermione away, even though she represents something he so desperately wants. The choice of the bed time story was brilliant, and the banter, with Hermione seeing through his gruff "professorial demeanor" is sweet. I likwe the way they both stay in character while they drift closer, and how they both relly respect and relate to each other.




Author's Response: :) Thanks! It's always nice to get a review from someone who's really into the story. Glad you like it!


Name: leahsm2 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/07 15:55 · For: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me
Your story is one of my favorites. I like the way Snape and Hermione are attracted to each other, and made to seem so attractive, even if to the outside world (as you make so pinfully obvious in other portions) they may not be.
""Legilimens." He plunged into her consciousness without his usual delicacy, quickly pilfering through deep memories, searching for specific content." I like how this sets the reader up for what will happen later in the chapter, showing Snape as a man in a mission.

"Snape could see it in her eyes; mere defiance was replaced by desperate horror, the indignant rage by a primal instinct for self-preservation. He sneered, pulling her head back by her long, thick hair as he reached into the front of his robes with his other hand. He was ready; he took hold of the waistband of her woolen tights and yanked downward--

--a sensation of falling through darkness--"

This was especially evocative of feeling the Occlumens finally being able to stop the Legilimens.

" "I don't deny it, young lady," he said softly. "But my hands are clean, and I stayed out of your dreams." " I liked this part alot, too, especially since he thought (hoped?) he'd find himself in her dreams.


I liked how Snape is fighting himself trying to push Hermione away, even though she represents something he so desperately wants. The choice of the bed time story was brilliant, and the banter, with Hermione seeing through his gruff "professorial demeanor" is sweet. I likwe the way they both stay in character while they drift closer, and how they both relly respect and relate to each other.




Name: leahsm2 (Signed) · Date: 11/19/07 15:55 · For: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me
Your story is one of my favorites. I like the way Snape and Hermione are attracted to each other, and made to seem so attractive, even if to the outside world (as you make so pinfully obvious in other portions) they may not be.
""Legilimens." He plunged into her consciousness without his usual delicacy, quickly pilfering through deep memories, searching for specific content." I like how this sets the reader up for what will happen later in the chapter, showing Snape as a man in a mission.

"Snape could see it in her eyes; mere defiance was replaced by desperate horror, the indignant rage by a primal instinct for self-preservation. He sneered, pulling her head back by her long, thick hair as he reached into the front of his robes with his other hand. He was ready; he took hold of the waistband of her woolen tights and yanked downward--

--a sensation of falling through darkness--"

This was especially evocative of feeling the Occlumens finally being able to stop the Legilimens.

" "I don't deny it, young lady," he said softly. "But my hands are clean, and I stayed out of your dreams." " I liked this part alot, too, especially since he thought (hoped?) he'd find himself in her dreams.


I liked how Snape is fighting himself trying to push Hermione away, even though she represents something he so desperately wants. The choice of the bed time story was brilliant, and the banter, with Hermione seeing through his gruff "professorial demeanor" is sweet. I likwe the way they both stay in character while they drift closer, and how they both relly respect and relate to each other.




Name: Follyfree (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 12:29 · For: Chapter 6: The First Brick Crumbles
This story is so well written!!! your so good at writing, it's almost unbelievable you exist, with out the help of a fairy tale!!!

Author's Response: *sporfle* *checks quickly* Yep, I'm real. *giggle giggle*


Name: snoop102103 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 16:51 · For: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
I like it

Author's Response: Thanks!


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