Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/13/08 23:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
Snape is uncharacteristicly Nice. I still think it has a good story line and yor a very talented writer.
Author's Response: Thanks. Read a bit more though--some of that niceness wears off in Ch. 12 or so...
Reviewer: testingt
Date: 01/02/08 8:45
Chapter: Epilogue
Aah. Very sweet.
Did you know your livejournal seems to be missing some chapters???????? As in, aargh?
What was there, though, was very good. You have a nasty imagination, a great sense of humor, and the verbal skills to do justice to both.
Author's Response: The LJ?? Good grief. Well, the story still isn't finished--it's up to 40 chapters or so, but I still have all of HBP to "annotate" yet. I'll have to look it over, maybe I "hid" some instead of "friendlocking" them.
Reviewer: testingt
Date: 01/02/08 8:37
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance
Mother of Merlin, this was brilliantly done! First, the belly-laugh humor mixed with gut-churning anguish--"the first year essays would have received a mark they truly deserved," indeed! Secondly, your portrayal of the devolution of his feelings as he deliberately destroys them--from "Hermione." to "Do I know the little tart?" to "good for me"
Just... very well done.
Author's Response: *grin* Thanks!
Reviewer: testingt
Date: 12/31/07 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape
Malfoy: Leverage Against.
Oh, what a great ending!
Author's Response: *bows* Thanks! I was very proud of Chapter 5 on the whole.
Reviewer: AJV
Date: 12/21/07 1:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
Uhhhh, does this story involve Snape and Hermione fucking? Coz that would be sooo FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Now, now, you don't want me to give away the ending, do you?
Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 12/20/07 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
please can you send the the link so i can read the whole story. I've tried to find it but I'm not having any luck and it's really bugging me now. :D thanks. if you could email it to mme the link is on my page.
~x~
Author's Response: you can also friend me at LJ if you have an account.
Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.
Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.
Reviewer: SlyDraco
Date: 12/14/07 1:43
Chapter: Epilogue
First question: what's MNFF?. ok that's the only question that i have but I thought that you r story tootaaalllyy rocked. I loved the way you designed your plot and the way you carried it out itwas perfect and beutifull, Gorgeus *sniff...sniff*
Author's Response: Muggle Net Fan Fiction. Fair Ex is archived elsewhere and has 20 more chapters than here (and isn't finished yet.) But it gets a little twisty as you go on.
Reviewer: birdymain
Date: 11/22/07 23:19
Chapter: Epilogue
*sniffles* How sad. Good story good story. I actually read it all. . .
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 17: Confrontation
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 16: Truth
:)
Author's Response: ;)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:33
Chapter: Chapter 15: Fever
Uhoh That does not sound too good! Terrific chapter
Author's Response: Stewing in his own juices is not good for such a pessimist.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:32
Chapter: Chapter 14: Silver Linings
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 13: Snape's Worst Week
Ooooo, interesting ending!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 12: Sensibility
Nice little heart to heart there!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 11: Abandon
Awwww, that is sweet!
Author's Response: hee hee. Our Sev can be such the charmer when he tries.
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:10
Chapter: Chapter 10: Reckoning
Very nicely written conversation!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:08
Chapter: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me
Amazing chapter! But it seems Snape almost hit the nail on the head with his ploy :)
Author's Response: Heh, well, Snape's not one to do things halfway...
