Reviews For Fair Exchanges
Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 14: Silver Linings

Ohhhhhh.........The down, boy comment..........Woooooooaaaaah

Author's Response: *snerk* Snape's cute when he loses his cool.

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 4:03
Chapter: Chapter 11: Abandon

Ohh you dirty dog for that ending.

Author's Response: Woof! Woof!

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 3:48
Chapter: Chapter 10: Reckoning

I'm not sure what squick is but i'm glad there isn't more of it.

Author's Response: *snerk* Oh, there's more, but not till later.

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 3:34
Chapter: Chapter 9: That Which Does Not Kill Me

I am truly sorry for the following teenage girlishness but OHH EMM GEE......

Author's Response: That's the "not so nice" chapter I was thinking of...

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 2:52
Chapter: Chapter 7: Distillations

I am speachless. I am without speach.....I am lost for words......For words i am lost

Author's Response: I hope that's a good thing.

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 2:07
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape

Oh wow......The imagry made me want to light myself on fire and jump out the window.....

Author's Response: Imagine how poor Sev must have felt!

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/14/08 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 4: Compound Interest

I sit here finishing off the pickles, even drinking the juice and I say that this story gets better and better. Maybe I've said a little to much....sorry :-)

Author's Response: That's OK, I'm eating Oyster Crackers. but a pickle sounds pretty good now that you mention it...

Reviewer: Stephaninny
Date: 01/13/08 23:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

Snape is uncharacteristicly Nice. I still think it has a good story line and yor a very talented writer.

Author's Response: Thanks. Read a bit more though--some of that niceness wears off in Ch. 12 or so...

Reviewer: testingt
Date: 01/02/08 8:45
Chapter: Epilogue

Aah. Very sweet.

Did you know your livejournal seems to be missing some chapters???????? As in, aargh?

What was there, though, was very good. You have a nasty imagination, a great sense of humor, and the verbal skills to do justice to both.

Author's Response: The LJ?? Good grief. Well, the story still isn't finished--it's up to 40 chapters or so, but I still have all of HBP to "annotate" yet. I'll have to look it over, maybe I "hid" some instead of "friendlocking" them.

Reviewer: testingt
Date: 01/02/08 8:37
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

Mother of Merlin, this was brilliantly done! First, the belly-laugh humor mixed with gut-churning anguish--"the first year essays would have received a mark they truly deserved," indeed! Secondly, your portrayal of the devolution of his feelings as he deliberately destroys them--from "Hermione." to "Do I know the little tart?" to "good for me"

Just... very well done.

Author's Response: *grin* Thanks!

Reviewer: testingt
Date: 12/31/07 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape

Malfoy: Leverage Against.

Oh, what a great ending!

Author's Response: *bows* Thanks! I was very proud of Chapter 5 on the whole.

Reviewer: AJV
Date: 12/21/07 1:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

Uhhhh, does this story involve Snape and Hermione fucking? Coz that would be sooo FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Now, now, you don't want me to give away the ending, do you?

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 12/20/07 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

please can you send the the link so i can read the whole story. I've tried to find it but I'm not having any luck and it's really bugging me now. :D thanks. if you could email it to mme the link is on my page.


Author's Response: you can also friend me at LJ if you have an account.

Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.

Author's Response: LOL!

Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.

Reviewer: LilyxElizabethxSnape
Date: 12/18/07 22:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

Woo!!! Mississippi is on the map! I'm from South Mississippi, myself.

Reviewer: SlyDraco
Date: 12/14/07 1:43
Chapter: Epilogue

First question: what's MNFF?. ok that's the only question that i have but I thought that you r story tootaaalllyy rocked. I loved the way you designed your plot and the way you carried it out itwas perfect and beutifull, Gorgeus *sniff...sniff*

Author's Response: Muggle Net Fan Fiction. Fair Ex is archived elsewhere and has 20 more chapters than here (and isn't finished yet.) But it gets a little twisty as you go on.

Reviewer: birdymain
Date: 11/22/07 23:19
Chapter: Epilogue

*sniffles* How sad. Good story good story. I actually read it all. . .

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:37
Chapter: Chapter 17: Confrontation

Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/20/07 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 16: Truth


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