Reviews For Fair Exchanges
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 3: Old Habits Die Hard

I was planning to stop after chapter 1 for this evening (it's 1am at the mo) but this has somewhat captured my interest. I think that your potrayal of Hermione as a very strong and determined character is very true to her and Snape's reactions also very accurate. Good stuff! Maybe just one more chapter this evening... Hehe

Phily :)

Author's Response: It'll be there tomorrow, too...but I'm glad you're hooked.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

A second great chapter! The plot thickens... I have to say you are very good at drawing my interest as I usually would steer well clear of Snape/Hermione but this seems promising!

Phily :)

Author's Response: Hee hee, yah, it has quite a bit of squick in it, not the least of which is the fact that she's still a student. But it has its moments--wait'll you get to Ch. 5.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

Oh my! A strange exchange for a student and teacher... hehe. As you can see I am back for more of your wonderful writing! :) Good opening chapter-short-ish, good pace and grabs your interest. I'll keep reading!

Phily :)

Author's Response: great! Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue

I cried....thank you.

Author's Response: Woot!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:56
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft

Please email me access to the adult version on other wites...I need it..I said I wasn't going to read the end...but I had to..what can I say, I am a romantic.

Author's Response: Of course you had to read it--it's the best part!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:52
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

I have to admit...after last chapter I wanted more....much more...this story has been a wonderful this. I am very disappointed...but I understand why you did it...can you drop me a line and let me know where the rest is published....I need it!!! I really enjoy your made this a wonderful romance, that brougt me to tears....this is my favorite "sick" ship...thanks for the journey...I can't bear to read the rest.....

Author's Response: lol, there's also info in my author bio on how to find the "lost chapters"

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 11: Abandon

LOVE it....that is all I can say...The writing is superb and leaves me wanting chapter!!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 6:35
Chapter: Chapter 10: Reckoning

I am so loving this is different and very refreshing....I am totally absorbed into it....

Author's Response: Awesome!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/13/07 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 6: The First Brick Crumbles

Oh...this is becoming a wonderful fairy-tale...I really like it....I love the way in which Snape is portrayed ...hungry for that glimpse of what could be.....

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: xMudblooDxScuMx
Date: 04/13/07 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

I love the hilarity of Snape dealing with Hermione coming into his bedroom, it is very well written and quite a good read so far!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rowena8
Date: 04/11/07 13:45
Chapter: Chapter 14: Silver Linings

wow!. i absolutly love this "book" you are awesome.. i would LOVE to read so more hermione/snape relationship stories if you have them. if you do, please contact me at
thanks a billion

Author's Response: Thanks! You should go find the extended story on TPP...

Reviewer: rowena8
Date: 04/09/07 16:43
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

morgan le Fay?? isnt that from Mists Of Avalon by marrion zimmer bradley

Author's Response: Probably. It's originally from the Arthurian legends.

Reviewer: Lavenderviola
Date: 04/08/07 0:55
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

oh my goodness, so tragically heroic
heartbreaking, for certain

Author's Response: *bows*

Reviewer: Lavenderviola
Date: 04/08/07 0:32
Chapter: Chapter 18: Atlas and Axis

I love your idioms "I'm a bacon sandwich" from earlier and the raisin/guinea pig one here
brilliantly funny : )

~also enjoying the story very much

Author's Response: Thanks! Being a guinea pig owner/slave, the latter came naturally... :)

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 16:35
Chapter: Epilogue

This story is amazing, It is definatly one of my faves! Thankyou, for posting and letting us all read this brilliant piece of fiction! Yay! Hermione and Snape are together! (thats something i never thought i would say!)

Author's Response: LOL, there's still more to come at other sites.

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 16:18
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft

that is seriously cute! I am so glad she got the message! And i happy that you have done an epilogue!!!

Author's Response: I wasn't going to, but I got a nice idea for it just as I was finishing the last chapter, so what the hey.

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 16:05
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

aww... he and hermione are no more :'(
i never thought i would say that! I also read about snapes little visit into the forest!! I am hardly suprised that mugglenet rejected that chappie! It was excellently written though!

Author's Response: Hee hee...go back and read Ch. 8 too. That one was turned down here as well.

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 8:00
Chapter: Chapter 21: Disaster

There was soo many oppourtunities for Sirius to stay behind; he would still be alive if had took them!!! I still belive he will come back!!!
Another great chapter as usual! This story has been favourited on my list!

Author's Response: *sporfle* Well, if you read my big fic, Heirs of Slytherin, your wish will come true...*wink*

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 7:02
Chapter: Chapter 20: Words of Warning

ooo, dangerous events certainly are being set into motion! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, Snape making a new friend can only mean trouble.

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/05/07 6:22
Chapter: Chapter 17: Confrontation

If Harry had only just asked... It was good to see the conversation between snape an lupin. The subtley of a turd in a punchbowl, god the made me laugh

Author's Response: *grins*

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