Reviews For Fair Exchanges
Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/28/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 21: Disaster

I like this side story to OOTP it is well put together as far as I can tell. I haven't read the book in quite a while.

Author's Response: I researched it pretty hard to make sure it fit...but who knows, I may have goofed here and there. But it's fun!

Reviewer: Hazil
Date: 04/28/07 15:44
Chapter: Epilogue

i love this story so much!! xx

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 16:36
Chapter: Epilogue

YAY i loved it!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 16:11
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft

omg so sad. i cried. i am defentally reading the rest!!!

Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 15:58
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

oh my did that happen? poor hermione

Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/23/07 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 19: Release

wow........ lol

Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/22/07 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape

lol thats hilarious, gross

Author's Response: Gotta love Umbridge...or not.

Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/21/07 0:53
Chapter: Epilogue

loved the ending!
the part after harry is triked into going to the minestry is a bit confusing but everything comes to a close perfectly

Author's Response: That's because there are about 25 missing chapters between the Ministry and the ending. They're posted elsewhere. See my Author Bio for links.

Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/20/07 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

he is being kind of pushover don't you think? i mean it's snape?
inprovable but like were the story is going; but you could have made things a little more dificult on hermiony, i would make thing more like the books

Author's Response: Oh, it'll get more difficult for her soon enough. Wait and see.

Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/20/07 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

kinda far fetghed
i mean bedtime storie?

Author's Response: You don't think Snape would do ANYTHING to get Potter's Occlumency lessons over with?

Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 04/18/07 18:43
Chapter: Epilogue

wow your story was great i fancied a change in genre and this is what i read and i have to say i thought it was great!!!! write a sequel

Author's Response: Well, there are about 18 more chapters of this one on other sites--see my Author Bio for links.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/16/07 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 6: The First Brick Crumbles

Wow, a soft side to him? Really? This is very well written, though, as you don't see it coming (a let up in his harsh exterior) and I think you have captured Snape's character perfectly. Well done!

Phily :)

Author's Response: *bows* thanks!

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/16/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape

Oh, gosh! I didn't see that coming! Lol, poor Snape having to deal with her. I never thought I would say 'poor Snape' about any situation! A slightly squirmy yet fabulous chapter all the same!

Phily :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Ch. 5 is still one of my all time favorites.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 3: Old Habits Die Hard

I was planning to stop after chapter 1 for this evening (it's 1am at the mo) but this has somewhat captured my interest. I think that your potrayal of Hermione as a very strong and determined character is very true to her and Snape's reactions also very accurate. Good stuff! Maybe just one more chapter this evening... Hehe

Phily :)

Author's Response: It'll be there tomorrow, too...but I'm glad you're hooked.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square

A second great chapter! The plot thickens... I have to say you are very good at drawing my interest as I usually would steer well clear of Snape/Hermione but this seems promising!

Phily :)

Author's Response: Hee hee, yah, it has quite a bit of squick in it, not the least of which is the fact that she's still a student. But it has its moments--wait'll you get to Ch. 5.

Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal

Oh my! A strange exchange for a student and teacher... hehe. As you can see I am back for more of your wonderful writing! :) Good opening chapter-short-ish, good pace and grabs your interest. I'll keep reading!

Phily :)

Author's Response: great! Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue

I cried....thank you.

Author's Response: Woot!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:56
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft

Please email me access to the adult version on other wites...I need it..I said I wasn't going to read the end...but I had to..what can I say, I am a romantic.

Author's Response: Of course you had to read it--it's the best part!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:52
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance

I have to admit...after last chapter I wanted more....much more...this story has been a wonderful this. I am very disappointed...but I understand why you did it...can you drop me a line and let me know where the rest is published....I need it!!! I really enjoy your made this a wonderful romance, that brougt me to tears....this is my favorite "sick" ship...thanks for the journey...I can't bear to read the rest.....

Author's Response: lol, there's also info in my author bio on how to find the "lost chapters"

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 11: Abandon

LOVE it....that is all I can say...The writing is superb and leaves me wanting chapter!!

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