Reviewer: raquel
Date: 04/28/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 21: Disaster
I like this side story to OOTP it is well put together as far as I can tell. I haven't read the book in quite a while.
Author's Response: I researched it pretty hard to make sure it fit...but who knows, I may have goofed here and there. But it's fun!
Reviewer: Hazil
Date: 04/28/07 15:44
Chapter: Epilogue
i love this story so much!! xx
Author's Response: Yay!
Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 16:36
Chapter: Epilogue
YAY i loved it!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 16:11
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft
omg so sad. i cried. i am defentally reading the rest!!!
Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/24/07 15:58
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance
oh my god......how did that happen? poor hermione
Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/23/07 18:09
Chapter: Chapter 19: Release
wow........ lol
Reviewer: dan_the_bobcat
Date: 04/22/07 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape
lol thats hilarious, gross
Author's Response: Gotta love Umbridge...or not.
Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/21/07 0:53
Chapter: Epilogue
loved the ending!
the part after harry is triked into going to the minestry is a bit confusing but everything comes to a close perfectly
Author's Response: That's because there are about 25 missing chapters between the Ministry and the ending. They're posted elsewhere. See my Author Bio for links.
Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/20/07 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
he is being kind of pushover don't you think? i mean it's snape?
inprovable but like were the story is going; but you could have made things a little more dificult on hermiony, i would make thing more like the books
Author's Response: Oh, it'll get more difficult for her soon enough. Wait and see.
Reviewer: riza
Date: 04/20/07 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
kinda far fetghed
i mean bedtime storie?
Author's Response: You don't think Snape would do ANYTHING to get Potter's Occlumency lessons over with?
Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 04/18/07 18:43
Chapter: Epilogue
wow your story was great i fancied a change in genre and this is what i read and i have to say i thought it was great!!!! write a sequel
Author's Response: Well, there are about 18 more chapters of this one on other sites--see my Author Bio for links.
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/16/07 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 6: The First Brick Crumbles
Wow, a soft side to him? Really? This is very well written, though, as you don't see it coming (a let up in his harsh exterior) and I think you have captured Snape's character perfectly. Well done!
Phily :)
Author's Response: *bows* thanks!
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/16/07 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Great Escape
Oh, gosh! I didn't see that coming! Lol, poor Snape having to deal with her. I never thought I would say 'poor Snape' about any situation! A slightly squirmy yet fabulous chapter all the same!
Phily :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Ch. 5 is still one of my all time favorites.
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 3: Old Habits Die Hard
I was planning to stop after chapter 1 for this evening (it's 1am at the mo) but this has somewhat captured my interest. I think that your potrayal of Hermione as a very strong and determined character is very true to her and Snape's reactions also very accurate. Good stuff! Maybe just one more chapter this evening... Hehe
Phily :)
Author's Response: It'll be there tomorrow, too...but I'm glad you're hooked.
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: Fair and Square
A second great chapter! The plot thickens... I have to say you are very good at drawing my interest as I usually would steer well clear of Snape/Hermione but this seems promising!
Phily :)
Author's Response: Hee hee, yah, it has quite a bit of squick in it, not the least of which is the fact that she's still a student. But it has its moments--wait'll you get to Ch. 5.
Reviewer: hermione_at_heart
Date: 04/14/07 18:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Art of the Deal
Oh my! A strange exchange for a student and teacher... hehe. As you can see I am back for more of your wonderful writing! :) Good opening chapter-short-ish, good pace and grabs your interest. I'll keep reading!
Phily :)
Author's Response: great! Hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue
I cried....thank you.
Author's Response: Woot!
Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:56
Chapter: Final Chapter: Bereft
Please email me access to the adult version on other wites...I need it..I said I wasn't going to read the end...but I had to..what can I say, I am a romantic.
Author's Response: Of course you had to read it--it's the best part!
Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 7:52
Chapter: Penultimate Chapter: Severance
I have to admit...after last chapter I wanted more....much more...this story has been a wonderful romance...now this. I am very disappointed...but I understand why you did it...can you drop me a line and let me know where the rest is published....I need it!!! I really enjoy your writing...you made this a wonderful romance, that brougt me to tears....this is my favorite "sick" ship...thanks for the journey...I can't bear to read the rest.....
Author's Response: lol, there's also info in my author bio on how to find the "lost chapters"
Reviewer: luvtheweasleys
Date: 04/14/07 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 11: Abandon
LOVE it....that is all I can say...The writing is superb and leaves me wanting more.....next chapter!!
