stop making james like evil, sirius always liked james and thot he was a good man
another great chapter, keep up the good work!!!
wow i have just read this fic
and its amazing
took me ages to read though
but i suppose thats a good thing
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much, I'm flattered that you read the whole thing through. It is rather long, huh?
I can't get enough of this story, its GREAT!
Author's Response: Heh, thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!
Great like usual. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks so much, more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
this reminds me of the Notebook
Author's Response: Really? Thanks, I guess. I fell asleep during that one. Well, only for a bit.
i hope it's the motorbike
Author's Response: Keep reading. ;)
awww. everythings so lovey doveyy.
does that make sense?
:] still loving it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I get what you're saying. Thanks so much!
Yay, thanks for updating! Make sure there's lots of Remus coming up, I love him! And good luck on your finals!
Author's Response: More Remus, yeah! And I did pretty well on my finals, except for Algebra, which is usually my best subject. Oh, well.
love this story. I love the marauders.
but, one thing, it keeps switching between past and present tense.
Other than that, i love it.
Author's Response: Oopsie. I noticed I was doing that towards the end, and tried to go back and fix it. I'd been writing a lot of essays and such in the present tense when I wrote this chapter. Heh.
Thanks for this chapter. i like how you make sure everybody is concerned with being, for lack of better word, proper. James and Lily getting a little less physical. Sirius and Adriyana not doing it in the utility closet. I like that approach. Great Job, next chapter please! :-)
Author's Response: Hehe. Yeah, well, they're trying to show maturity. Probably won't last long, though! ;D
good job. i like the end with McGonagall. How could i forget you or this story?! Keep Writing
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you didn't forget me!
you switched to present tense for a little bit and when you're talking about sirius waiting you say "too minutes"
Author's Response: Okay, I'll go back and fix that stuff. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!
update soon please i've just read all 36 chapters and i would really like to continue ;)
Author's Response: Sure, the next chapter's in queue now.
i was just re-reading some of these earlier chapters, and some of the dialogue doesn't make sense after earlier bits being edited.
Just letting you know.
Author's Response: Oh dear. I tried to check for this sort of thing, but I knew it would happen anyway. Could you tell me specifically what you noticed that was off? I'd really like to go and fix it, but I don't have the time to check over the entire thing myself. Thanks SO much for telling me! :D
good chpter... lily being lily of course...XD but anyway...hmmm... maybe a bit of romantic drama... idk. nothing bad but somthin to send somone off an end and the other person makes it so much better with a snog in the attic...dont ask...XD btu anyway. mroe fluff! thats it just more fluff!!! but poor you. good luck on finals!
Author's Response: Hehe...thanks!
Great chapter once again!
Should be interesting to see what happens with Remus' situation and with Sirius and Agie.
Looking Forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, then next chapter's in queue now!