Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 07/17/08 23:00
Chapter: Mood Swings

stop making james like evil, sirius always liked james and thot he was a good man

Reviewer: the don
Date: 07/17/08 22:09
Chapter: Mood Swings

f-ing James

another great chapter, keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: seza
Date: 07/05/08 13:16
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

wow i have just read this fic
and its amazing
took me ages to read though
but i suppose thats a good thing


Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much, I'm flattered that you read the whole thing through. It is rather long, huh?

Reviewer: nimbus2008
Date: 06/20/08 23:02
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

I can't get enough of this story, its GREAT!

Author's Response: Heh, thank you!

Reviewer: Pot
Date: 06/19/08 19:08
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

just brilliant

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 06/18/08 2:42
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

Great like usual. Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks so much, more soon!

Reviewer: Pot
Date: 06/17/08 13:40
Chapter: Iím Swearing Vendetta, Wanna Come With?


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Pot
Date: 06/16/08 21:42
Chapter: Sirius: On Why Patience Isn't a Very Fun Virtue

this reminds me of the Notebook

Author's Response: Really? Thanks, I guess. I fell asleep during that one. Well, only for a bit.

Reviewer: Pot
Date: 06/15/08 20:57
Chapter: Prongs and Presents

i hope it's the motorbike

Author's Response: Keep reading. ;)

Reviewer: crazyfairy93
Date: 06/11/08 22:52
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

love it!
awww. everythings so lovey doveyy.
yet not.
does that make sense?
:] still loving it.

Author's Response: Yeah, I get what you're saying. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 06/11/08 18:17
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

Yay, thanks for updating! Make sure there's lots of Remus coming up, I love him! And good luck on your finals!

Author's Response: More Remus, yeah! And I did pretty well on my finals, except for Algebra, which is usually my best subject. Oh, well.

Reviewer: grumpygills66
Date: 06/11/08 3:43
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

love this story. I love the marauders.
but, one thing, it keeps switching between past and present tense.

Other than that, i love it.
update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Oopsie. I noticed I was doing that towards the end, and tried to go back and fix it. I'd been writing a lot of essays and such in the present tense when I wrote this chapter. Heh.

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 06/10/08 19:53
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

Thanks for this chapter. i like how you make sure everybody is concerned with being, for lack of better word, proper. James and Lily getting a little less physical. Sirius and Adriyana not doing it in the utility closet. I like that approach. Great Job, next chapter please! :-)

Author's Response: Hehe. Yeah, well, they're trying to show maturity. Probably won't last long, though! ;D

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 06/10/08 19:41
Chapter: Really Awkward Situations.

good job. i like the end with McGonagall. How could i forget you or this story?! Keep Writing

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you didn't forget me!

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 06/10/08 18:21
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

you switched to present tense for a little bit and when you're talking about sirius waiting you say "too minutes"

Author's Response: Okay, I'll go back and fix that stuff. Thanks!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 06/10/08 13:57
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

lovely! =D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: fishwithwand
Date: 06/10/08 13:54
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

update soon please i've just read all 36 chapters and i would really like to continue ;)

Author's Response: Sure, the next chapter's in queue now.

Reviewer: the don
Date: 06/10/08 7:49
Chapter: Inturrupted Snogging Scenes and Bittersweet Goodbyes

i was just re-reading some of these earlier chapters, and some of the dialogue doesn't make sense after earlier bits being edited.

Just letting you know.

Author's Response: Oh dear. I tried to check for this sort of thing, but I knew it would happen anyway. Could you tell me specifically what you noticed that was off? I'd really like to go and fix it, but I don't have the time to check over the entire thing myself. Thanks SO much for telling me! :D

Reviewer: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy
Date: 06/08/08 20:32
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

good chpter... lily being lily of course...XD but anyway...hmmm... maybe a bit of romantic drama... idk. nothing bad but somthin to send somone off an end and the other person makes it so much better with a snog in the attic...dont ask...XD btu anyway. mroe fluff! thats it just more fluff!!! but poor you. good luck on finals!

Author's Response: Hehe...thanks!

Reviewer: the don
Date: 06/08/08 19:43
Chapter: "I'm New To This."

Great chapter once again!

Should be interesting to see what happens with Remus' situation and with Sirius and Agie.

Looking Forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, then next chapter's in queue now!

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