Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/21/08 14:50
Chapter: Then, Everyone Screamed Bloody-Freakin’ Homicide. The End.

that was hilarious especially the fuck fuck fukitty fuck

Author's Response: I love it too! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/20/08 15:57
Chapter: Ixnay on the Oopidstay!

omg they have to get back togehter ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Author's Response: Heh...Keep reading!

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/19/08 14:39
Chapter: Sirius: On Why Patience Isn't a Very Fun Virtue

omg will she ever remember Sirius? I really like how this story is more about Sirius and Adriyana instead of James and LIly. I also like how it contains the story of James and Lily at the same time. Totally awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks. James and Lily are focused on more during their seventh year.

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/19/08 14:31
Chapter: Stage 2: Anger (Why Lily and Amnesia Don't Mix)

Who was lily talking to at the end? her self?

Author's Response: Yup!

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 02/18/08 16:31
Chapter: Like a Quidditch Move

Gah! Update! I love the story... please write more or I might lose my mind!

Author's Response: Next chapter's done! Just waiting for the queue to re-open!

Author's Response: Next chapter's done! Just waiting for the queue to re-open!

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 02/18/08 16:29
Chapter: Like a Quidditch Move

Gah! Update! I love the story... please write more or I might lose my mind!

Author's Response: Next chapter's done! Just waiting for the queue to re-open!

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/18/08 15:58
Chapter: Hostile Suits of Armor: The Ultimate Antidepressant

what are you serious!!!!!!!! ah this was the best chapter ever even its a little short but holy crap ahhhhhhhhh!

Author's Response: It's not my favorite, but I'm glad you liked it! :D

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/18/08 15:50
Chapter: James Potter: The Other He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named

holey crap! this is so good! what happened to Adriyana?

Author's Response: Keep reading!

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/18/08 15:15
Chapter: Neglecting Your Friends is Good For Them...Sometimes

liked the love bites lol

Author's Response: ;D

Reviewer: LilyEvans__95
Date: 02/18/08 14:06
Chapter: Prologue: Making History

that's super good! i liked how you mentioned people we know like remus, peter, sirius, regalus, james, and alice. but what about adriana! She's way to old to be there age!

Author's Response: This story was started way before DH, so it's not the same one. Just an odd coincidence.

Reviewer: magyk_killer
Date: 02/05/08 22:17
Chapter: Please Keep Your Sexual Tension OFF the Quidditch Field!

good, loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: harryandginnyrock
Date: 02/05/08 17:06
Chapter: Like a Quidditch Move


Author's Response: Worked, didn't it? :D

Reviewer: ChaChia
Date: 02/01/08 4:46
Chapter: Like a Quidditch Move


I was so happy to see that you've FINALLY updated (though you do update more frequently than other authors, i must thankyou sincerely for that) and i was SO happy to get back into the story.

I hope Agie doesn't succumb to Sirius' pressure (though i don't think she's the kind of person to) and if they do sleep together, she doesn't regret it and it doesn't become a rumour at Hogwarts - because everyone likes their first time to perfect right?

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yay! Enthusiasm! :D

I'm trying to write some extra chapters now so I have some padding. Hopefully, I won't ever take this long again.

You'll have to wait a bit longer for that part. I still haven't quite figured it out yet.

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/27/08 7:31
Chapter: Like a Quidditch Move

NICE JOB! And also, nice cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Thanks oodles!

Heh. Oodles.

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/27/08 7:16
Chapter: The Three Broomsticks, Part Two: “You’ve Got a Little…Yeah.”

Perfectly fluffy in every way!

Author's Response: Yay! I love it, too. :D

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/27/08 6:55
Chapter: He’d Probably Have a Seizure of Joy

You said in the last chapter (or the one before that, I forgot) you ran out of review box thingys but now you didnt!!! Yay!

Nice job with the whole Lily breaks up with Jeremy and Lily has a burning desire to kiss James.

Author's Response: I thought of some more!


Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/26/08 21:38
Chapter: Why Don’t You Go Find a Parade and Rain on it?

So marshmellowy sweet and mushy. Except for some parts that were a bit stale marshmellow. GOOD JOB

Author's Response: Heh. I like stale marshmallows better, actually. Then again, I'm a weirdo.

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/26/08 21:32
Chapter: Ixnay on the Oopidstay!

Chocolate = Girls Best Friend, nice job for pointing that out. Or at least, its MY best friend.

Author's Response: Chocolate>Everything, Y/Y?

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/26/08 21:24
Chapter: Introducing: The 'Stop Hitting Yourself!' Hex

Watch Over = Stalk Howes and Lily until they get really close and Bat Boogey Hex Howes where the sun don't shine!

Author's Response: Ouchie.


Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/26/08 21:13
Chapter: Operation: Perfect Boyfriend

SUSPENSE! You are the master of the cliffhanger, my Break `n Bake mysterious author guy girl thingy!

Author's Response: 1)Coolest. Nickname. EVER.

2)Girl (though I'd like to meet the guy who writes like I do...heh)


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