Reviewer: natielovesyou
Date: 07/19/12 22:15
Chapter: Prologue: Making History

amazing

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/05/12 4:44
Chapter: Inturrupted Snogging Scenes and Bittersweet Goodbyes

pretty good

Reviewer: RideTheLightning
Date: 03/19/12 13:22
Chapter: Stephen Smith

Such a shame that this fic has just been left because it really is brilliant, please comeback and finish it.

Reviewer: voldeshorts
Date: 06/08/11 15:51
Chapter: Stephen Smith

is this ever getting updated?:(

got really into this.

Reviewer: Wmaster
Date: 03/24/11 19:34
Chapter: Stephen Smith

I hate when I'm reading a story on here, and I get really into it, but then I realize that the last time someone updated it was back in 2008 and it is now 2011..
I don't know why you gave up on this story, maybe lots of things were happening in your life and you forgot about it, or maybe you were just tired of writing it and decided to quit. I don't know, but whatever the reason, I just wanted you to know that I loved your story and if you ever feel like finishing it off, you still have at least one fan out here cheering for you.. So please please update!!

Reviewer: HalfBloodRose
Date: 02/24/11 4:08
Chapter: Stephen Smith

I first read this when I was like 15 or something :') me and my sister were talking about fan fiction the other day and I just thought I never actually finished this! So I read it through, will we ever know how it ends? :(

Reviewer: LVpotterlover
Date: 01/24/10 9:35
Chapter: Stephen Smith

what's taking so long?

Reviewer: LVpotterlover
Date: 01/24/10 9:35
Chapter: Stephen Smith

what's taking so long?

Reviewer: cia
Date: 07/09/09 16:58
Chapter: Stephen Smith

Yup u're correct about the video recorders but u missed the most important fact,i.e., no technology can be used inside hogwards.It was in the 4th book!!!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 04/26/09 17:29
Chapter: Ixnay on the Oopidstay!

i really liked the line we're in the same boat mate. Yeah, well, i think we're sinking. its really cool.

Reviewer: lilyjamesfan25
Date: 03/22/09 17:39
Chapter: Stephen Smith

this stiory is great, please update soon!!! I can't wait to continue reading and find out what the video well be about.

Reviewer: hp26
Date: 03/17/09 17:26
Chapter: Stephen Smith

please!!! more more more!! This story is to amazing for you not to finish!

Reviewer: hp26
Date: 03/17/09 10:23
Chapter: In Which We Discover Two Kinds of Falling: Sick and On James

i loved this chapter =) =)

Reviewer: hp26
Date: 03/17/09 8:36
Chapter: Prologue: Making History

=)

Reviewer: LochNessa
Date: 01/18/09 13:49
Chapter: Why Donít You Go Find a Parade and Rain on it?

If they don't snog at the beginning of the next chapter, I think I might need to break whatever's in my hands.
This story has me hooked, especially the Lily/James parts!
Everyone is miraculously in character, which is refreshing, and coupled with very good writing, this makes for quite the interesting story!
Although I must say, I'd like to hear more of Remus, Amber and their, um.. exploits -winkwink nudgenudge-

Reviewer: the don
Date: 11/28/08 22:04
Chapter: Prologue: Making History

Why aren't you updating?

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 10/14/08 23:37
Chapter: Stephen Smith

Nice chapter, but short, but it was nice, so that's okay. [Sorry for this extremely absurd way of writing this sentence, but this may be happening due to lack of sleep. lol.]

Anyway, this line I loved the best:

“You’ve got about ten seconds of footage of just your chest now. Probably not ‘classroom appropriate’.”

LOL. =D

Update?

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 10/14/08 23:26
Chapter: Mood Swings

Took me ages to read this chapter, but I did read it. Lol. Let's get on with the review then.

She knew he was intentionally trying to rile her up, that was the only explination.

'Explanation' is spelled wrong.

Sirius gave her a really funny look. “Holy shit.” he turned to look at Adriyana. “Thank God you don’t get mood swings like that.”

LOL. =D

Just as he approached the Fat Lady’s portrait, it swung open, and Lily and James stepped out.

...

Sirius blinked at her.

You should have written Sirius instead of 'he' right in the beginning. We never get to know who the person is until Sirius blinks. It becaomes sort of confusing for a moment or two.

Anyway, hilarious chapter! =D Loved Regulus' dialogues! He's such a sweetheart. =]

*goes to read the next chapter*

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 09/04/08 1:59
Chapter: Stephen Smith

a great chapter like usual
please updat quickly!!
type as fast as your fingers will let you!
lol

Reviewer: orlandoismine
Date: 08/31/08 0:51
Chapter: Stephen Smith

muggle electronics dont work inside hogwarts. the explaination given in the books is that there is too much magic in the air, and it interfears with them.

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