good except james was a seeker !!!
not a chaser
hehe evil marauders... was this written pre-HBP, because Slughorn was potions master in the marauder era.
HURRAH! HURRAH! HURRAH! i love it!
AWWW! Only one more chapter and it's over! :( i've really enjoyed reading your fabulistic fanfic
Girlie mate!!! Molly?! argh peter
Sirius is no longer super hard headed! HURRAH! pooooor remus..
OOO I feel so sorry for Remus!!! annoying snape..argh
The lair sounds incredibly cool! made by the founders too. wicked!
"like a scar."
WOW. Just like Harry. I hope that they will start to treat Remus better. Especially Sirius
Poor Remus! You describe his werewolf condition differently from other writers but I like your way better. Sirius is so hard headed.
I like the end of this chappy where it says they knew Madam Pomfrey very well due to all their injuries. Snape is annoying as usual but i can't really imagine him almost in tears..bit OOC
OOO I wish I could get Christmas presents like the ones in this Chapter. That would be rather interesting.
OH! James is so brilliantlly smart to look up something in a book..
aww! Poor lupin. you write so descriptively that i can sort of feel what lupin is going through.
I can't wait to read about their revenge. The green silver afro is rather amusing though.
LOL! Poor Snape! I would love to see that scene. HILARIOUS!
OHH!! I can't wait to read about what they do w/ Snape!!! LOL!
suspicions suspicions...hehehe they are getting suspicious i tell u!
THIS IS A RISKY BUT BRILLIANT PRANK!
I can't wait to see their prank on Snape...Snape is so ugh!!!