Reviews For The First Battle
Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/06/05 20:03
Chapter: Harry and Draco

wow, ur a really great writer! i cant believe this is your first one!

Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment! Thank you so much; I'm so glad you're enjoying my story! Thanks for all the nice reviews. Warmly, Nancy ;)

Reviewer: drummer321
Date: 01/06/05 18:58
Chapter: The Pact

Awsome story. Please update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 01/06/05 18:28
Chapter: Harry and Draco

this is awesome, I can't wait 'till the next chapter! your an awesome writer:)

Reviewer: babygirl1832z
Date: 01/06/05 17:09
Chapter: Harry and Draco

I love this story you are a writer and i cant wait to read more form you please update soon.

Reviewer: Syfes
Date: 01/06/05 16:27
Chapter: Harry and Draco

I just read all 10 chapters and i love it! Great story!

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 01/06/05 14:25
Chapter: Harry and Draco

oops, soz, i put my review in the wrong place, lol, chapter 1, well it was my 1st review...=)

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 01/06/05 14:22
Chapter: The Pact

wow, that was like a proper book, lol, i couldnt put it down, only thing is i noticed a lot of repetitive words in the same sentence etc, but im no grammer person, well done, good luck, and keep writing! (btw, its gt 2 be a 10)!

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/06/05 14:14
Chapter: Harry and Draco

love this story and the way it is developing

Reviewer: powerful_witch
Date: 01/06/05 8:19
Chapter: Harry and Draco

keep updating i wanna know what happen next. ur so kool!!!

Reviewer: powerful_witch
Date: 01/06/05 8:02
Chapter: The Malfoys

errrrr hate that greasy git!!! how cold????

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 01/05/05 19:42
Chapter: The Malfoys

great chapter! but what's up with snape?! mean, nasty, cold-hearted git lol PLEASE update soon:)

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/05/05 18:41
Chapter: The Malfoys

that was a great chapter! theres got to be more!! update quickly please!!

Reviewer: ickle_ronniekins
Date: 01/05/05 17:59
Chapter: The Malfoys

i love your story and its not just like some other really bad ones this is like a really good book and you seem able to describe relationships very well............... how old are you? (optional) -sarah

Author's Response: Hi, Sarah! I'm glad you like my story; I'm having TONS of fun writing it! In answer to your question, I'm probably much older than you think. I'm a mom with four kids, the oldest is 16, the youngest is four. I got hooked on Harry after I saw the first movie with my kids; now I'm a bigger fan than they are! Thanks so much for reading/reviewing my story! Nancy;)

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 01/05/05 16:00
Chapter: The Malfoys

I think that Snape is being a stupid git as usual. Update soon! I love your story!

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/05/05 15:53
Chapter: The Malfoys

wots wrong wiv snape?? is he just bein his normal unloving self, or is he jealous of ro and hermione?........ love the story, please update again soon!

Reviewer: professormoody
Date: 01/05/05 15:22
Chapter: The Malfoys

Really good so far, keep up the great work!

Reviewer: professormoody
Date: 01/05/05 15:05
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

Great story so far!

Reviewer: Berylla Chubb
Date: 01/04/05 21:42
Chapter: Secrets

This is an awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 01/04/05 17:43
Chapter: Secrets

wonderful chapter! I can't wait until the next one, update soon! I hope Snape's alright, i agree with lost innocence, i don't really like Snape, but i hope he's ok!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 01/03/05 20:24
Chapter: Secrets

HERMIONE'S AN ... AND SNAPE KNOWS!!!!! In the immortal words of Ronald Weasley, "He's mental!"

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