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Reviews For The First Battle

Name: moonlit fire (Signed) · Date: 01/21/05 16:00 · For: Battleground
wow, this is a good story. oh, and the reason some people might not be reading past one chapter is because it's so long and they don't feel like taking the time to read it all.

Name: HPAddictsAnonymous (Signed) · Date: 01/21/05 12:39 · For: Battleground
Very good story, one of my favourites, please keep it up! :D

Name: arrowshooter (Signed) · Date: 01/20/05 16:05 · For: Battleground
AMAZING truely wonderful! I loved that chapter! Great battle! I can't wait for another update!

Name: SingingBird (Signed) · Date: 01/20/05 8:20 · For: Battleground
WOW!!! The battle was awesome! I think its probably the best chapter so far!!!

Name: Berylla Chubb (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 18:52 · For: Battleground
Very riveting. Fascinating chapter!

Name: ArrabellaWeasley (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 17:03 · For: Battleground
WONDERFUL!! this story is great!! it took long to get this update but it was SO worth it! I love it! thank you! I cant believe the title is still christmas at hogwarts. lol. its so much more than that! is it too much to ask for another update soon? these mid-terms are absolutely killing me...

Name: kecort (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 16:34 · For: Battleground
FANTASTIC!!! the fight was magnifisant keep writting ur story is so great

Name: popey89 (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 14:44 · For: Battleground
awwww... dumbledore is so nice to harry, it is well cute. another really cool chapter well done!

Name: Jenry (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 13:34 · For: Battleground
wow, wot a battle, that was truly realistic, as far as magic can go being realistic...so harry cant be killed by a killing curse, or maybe it was just that time

Name: Stuart (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 12:52 · For: Battleground
Amazing!! That was an intense battle scene! I have never read anything like that here. I hope you get your next chapter out soon!

Name: Old Fart (Signed) · Date: 01/19/05 8:27 · For: Battleground
Wow. That was a powerfull chapter. Very intense and very well thought out. Well done. You are proving to be quite adept and insightfull. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! Nice to hear from a fellow "Old Fart!" Nancy ;)

Name: Stuart (Signed) · Date: 01/18/05 14:47 · For: Professor Trelawney
Amazing! Great idea about bringing Sirius back!

Name: Stuart (Signed) · Date: 01/18/05 13:25 · For: The Hospital Wing
Great story thusfar, gotta run though, the next chapter awaits! Constructive Critisism...are you crazy?

Name: ArrabellaWeasley (Signed) · Date: 01/16/05 21:14 · For: Warning
PLEASE! finish writing something!! i cant bear it!

Author's Response: Next chapter on the way!

Name: kecort (Signed) · Date: 01/15/05 14:57 · For: Warning
oh that is so good update i want ur updeate 5 min ago!!!! keep writting ur story is so good

Name: kecort (Signed) · Date: 01/15/05 14:48 · For: Harry and Draco
that was really well written keep going cant wait 4 more

Name: kecort (Signed) · Date: 01/15/05 14:39 · For: The Malfoys
i just so love ur story plz keep writting.

Name: kecort (Signed) · Date: 01/15/05 14:19 · For: Secrets
oh that was so cool the animargis and the snape mind thing keep writting

Name: penname (Signed) · Date: 01/15/05 7:15 · For: Warning
this is so great, obviously some like it, so you have to keep writing for us, so update really soon, OK!

Name: popey89 (Signed) · Date: 01/14/05 5:31 · For: Warning
this is a great story, and all storys need to be read beyond the first chapter before you properly get into them. i say keep writing, also i prefer to read stories that are completed so perhaps once it is finished more people will read. by the way, another great chapter

Author's Response: You guys are so great! Thank you so much for the encouragement! Nancy;)

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