Reviews For The First Battle
Reviewer: moonlit fire
Date: 01/21/05 16:00
Chapter: Battleground

wow, this is a good story. oh, and the reason some people might not be reading past one chapter is because it's so long and they don't feel like taking the time to read it all.

Reviewer: HPAddictsAnonymous
Date: 01/21/05 12:39
Chapter: Battleground

Very good story, one of my favourites, please keep it up! :D

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 01/20/05 16:05
Chapter: Battleground

AMAZING truely wonderful! I loved that chapter! Great battle! I can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 01/20/05 8:20
Chapter: Battleground

WOW!!! The battle was awesome! I think its probably the best chapter so far!!!

Reviewer: Berylla Chubb
Date: 01/19/05 18:52
Chapter: Battleground

Very riveting. Fascinating chapter!

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/19/05 17:03
Chapter: Battleground

WONDERFUL!! this story is great!! it took long to get this update but it was SO worth it! I love it! thank you! I cant believe the title is still christmas at hogwarts. lol. its so much more than that! is it too much to ask for another update soon? these mid-terms are absolutely killing me...

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 01/19/05 16:34
Chapter: Battleground

FANTASTIC!!! the fight was magnifisant keep writting ur story is so great

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/19/05 14:44
Chapter: Battleground

awwww... dumbledore is so nice to harry, it is well cute. another really cool chapter well done!

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 01/19/05 13:34
Chapter: Battleground

wow, wot a battle, that was truly realistic, as far as magic can go being harry cant be killed by a killing curse, or maybe it was just that time

Reviewer: Stuart
Date: 01/19/05 12:52
Chapter: Battleground

Amazing!! That was an intense battle scene! I have never read anything like that here. I hope you get your next chapter out soon!

Reviewer: Old Fart
Date: 01/19/05 8:27
Chapter: Battleground

Wow. That was a powerfull chapter. Very intense and very well thought out. Well done. You are proving to be quite adept and insightfull. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! Nice to hear from a fellow "Old Fart!" Nancy ;)

Reviewer: Stuart
Date: 01/18/05 14:47
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

Amazing! Great idea about bringing Sirius back!

Reviewer: Stuart
Date: 01/18/05 13:25
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

Great story thusfar, gotta run though, the next chapter awaits! Constructive Critisism...are you crazy?

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/16/05 21:14
Chapter: Warning

PLEASE! finish writing something!! i cant bear it!

Author's Response: Next chapter on the way!

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 01/15/05 14:57
Chapter: Warning

oh that is so good update i want ur updeate 5 min ago!!!! keep writting ur story is so good

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 01/15/05 14:48
Chapter: Harry and Draco

that was really well written keep going cant wait 4 more

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 01/15/05 14:39
Chapter: The Malfoys

i just so love ur story plz keep writting.

Reviewer: kecort
Date: 01/15/05 14:19
Chapter: Secrets

oh that was so cool the animargis and the snape mind thing keep writting

Reviewer: penname
Date: 01/15/05 7:15
Chapter: Warning

this is so great, obviously some like it, so you have to keep writing for us, so update really soon, OK!

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/14/05 5:31
Chapter: Warning

this is a great story, and all storys need to be read beyond the first chapter before you properly get into them. i say keep writing, also i prefer to read stories that are completed so perhaps once it is finished more people will read. by the way, another great chapter

Author's Response: You guys are so great! Thank you so much for the encouragement! Nancy;)

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