Reviews For The First Battle
Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 01/03/05 11:13
Chapter: Secrets

wonderful chapter! please finish!

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/03/05 6:21
Chapter: Secrets

cool, good chapter! when are you going to update again, i cant wait!

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 01/01/05 23:23
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

Great chapter, I can't wait to see what's in the package!

Reviewer: SiriusStaff7
Date: 01/01/05 19:54
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

this is great!!! update soon...

Reviewer: Lost innocence
Date: 01/01/05 19:09
Chapter: Secrets

Great chapter! I hope Snape is alright. He may not be my favorite charector but he has helped Harry a lot this year. PLease post again soon!

Reviewer: Lost innocence
Date: 01/01/05 19:03
Chapter: Secrets

Reading it..... reading it.... sry if this get annoying to see but its the only way my computer llets me read some chpters.....

Reviewer: LittleMissKnowItAll7
Date: 01/01/05 17:21
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

Awwww...it's so sweet but so sad! I absolutely love it--and can't wait to see what's in the Dursley's package!

Reviewer: popey89
Date: 01/01/05 16:04
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

please update soon, i really, really lie this story. it isnt too far fetched, neither is it too soppy. please update!!

Reviewer: senora_jurgums
Date: 12/31/04 17:58
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

it was the scariest thing 4 like 5 minutes i thought i was reading somtin ms r rote

Reviewer: ArrabellaWeasley
Date: 12/31/04 15:55
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

this story is wonderful! no criticism needed! the part where harry was thinkinkg about his first christmas was so sad, it was nice though. poor ron and his addled brain.. lol. hopefully he'll recover! please update soon! very well done for a first fic! good job!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:49
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

I could not find one thiing to critisize about in this wonderful story if I wanted to! If I could I would give you a 100000000000000000000... and so on and so forth.

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:41
Chapter: The Burrow

I was laughing really hard when I imagined that box zoom around and give Sirius a bloody nose! I love your story! It is amazing!!!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:29
Chapter: The Perfect Gift

Awwwwww, how sweet!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:20
Chapter: The Three Broomsticks

Hermione's special project? I can only wonder what that is.

Reviewer: Lost innocence
Date: 12/31/04 15:17
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

Great chapter! I feel so bad for Harry yet happy for him to. It had to be hard for him to talk to Sirius but was probaly the best thing that he could have heard at that moment. To bad his parents can't tal to him that way *sigh*. Post soon!

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:15
Chapter: Into Hogsmeade

Exactly right. They don't have a chance.

Reviewer: FantasyFanatic
Date: 12/31/04 15:11
Chapter: The Pact

Great!

Reviewer: Lost innocence
Date: 12/31/04 15:10
Chapter: Professor Trelawney

Reading it.... Reading it.......

Reviewer: Harrypotter_Gurl
Date: 12/31/04 14:33
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

I really really enjoyed it!!! 10 out of 10!!! Please update soon

Reviewer: arrowshooter
Date: 12/31/04 14:05
Chapter: The Hospital Wing

wow that chapter was soo good! I hope the next chapter is up soon:P lol Can't wait for an update:)

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