I did enjoy this ! And the way you keep the attention of the reader on the revelation to come... the danger would be that the revelation comes as a disappointment, but no - this makes sense ! And I loved the humor through out. Very Rowling !

Author's Response: Thank you! I was counting on the revelation being so unlikely it would indeed come as a surprise. :)

Liked it even though it was stretched a little too long for me. Some funny lines here and there even though some reference to dumbledore (some of his lines from the books...) were a bit too much. but, yes, good one-shot.

Author's Response: Thank you. It did turn out longer than I thought it would. I'm afraid I couldn't resist having Remu echo Dumbledore at one point!

I really liked how you had Hermione and the reader guessing what Harry and Ron were hiding from her. Please update quickly. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's just a oneshot though, I'm afraid -- the basic premise is sufficiently bizarre that it's unlikely to scale to a full length story. :)