Reviews For You Tell Her
Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 02/18/12 2:40
Chapter: Story Text

Gotta say, longest one-shot I've ever seen, but I loved it. Seriously, it was amazing. I could never have ever come up with the idea of Hermione as a seer. You really captured how much she would hate it, and how Ron and Harry would try to hid it from her, for her on good. Absolutely Splendid. :)

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 08/05/07 16:18
Chapter: Story Text

Since it wasnít in the summary, I had no idea you were taking this story in that direction.
Until I reached the point of the Pensieve, I was imagining all sorts of things, just as Hermione was. You did a great job with the misdirection and keeping me guessing.
I was impressed with the levels of protection you allowed Harry to learn. The interactions with the other Order members were very well done, and I liked the by-play between the other couples.
Having Hermione, as a seer was something I really havenít given that much thought to. She always hated Trelawney and never put much stock in the subject of Divination. I know she reformed her opinion after the DoM, but for her to become a seer is just a little out there for me.
I really enjoyed this story and I plan on reading your others, I have a long list that I have planned to read, and yours are mixed into them. When I read I will review and let you know what I thought. Thanks for the slightly strange but very good read.


Author's Response: Thank you -- it was a slightly strange (well, very strange) idea that I originally thought would make a good basis for a crackfic, but when I wrote it, it turned out half-serious. :) Glad you enjoyed it, and that the characters worked.

Reviewer: Radiant_817
Date: 08/02/07 23:15
Chapter: Story Text

cute, i liked it as a quick little oneshot.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: hermione777
Date: 07/03/07 8:51
Chapter: Story Text

I hardly ever review, but I had to leave a comment on this one. This was so GOOD!! When you had Tonks explaining the effects of shock and emotional upheaval, it was so convincing, I felt like "oh....THAT'S the way it really works." I had to look up from the computer to remind myself this was not the actual book!

Everyone was so in character, the whole time. It was really, really great.

Oh -- and I had to laugh at the anvil-sized hints. That was cute. ;)

Superb job, once again.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm always glad when someone finds that one of my stories meshes well with the characterisations and themes of the books (at least, when I'm trying to do that, which I was here). So thank you, once again. :)

Reviewer: hermione777
Date: 07/03/07 8:49
Chapter: Story Text

I hardly ever review, but I had to leave a comment on this one. This was so GOOD!! When you had Tonks explaining the effects of shock and emotional upheaval, it was so convincing, I felt like "oh....THAT'S the way it really works." I had to look up from the computer to remind myself this was not the actual book!

Everyone was so in character, the whole time. It was really, really great.

Oh -- and I had to laugh at the anvil-sized hints. That was cute. ;)

Superb job, once again.

Author's Response: See above ...

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 06/21/07 16:12
Chapter: Story Text

That was great. I love the "fear & trepidation" that Harry & Ron were having over telling her. Like a verbal game of "hot potato".

Author's Response: Thank you! Always difficult. :)

Reviewer: Minnie07
Date: 06/15/07 10:39
Chapter: Story Text

I loved the reference to the ANVIL-SIZED HINTS! Go J.K. and you!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: eve5235
Date: 05/19/07 2:35
Chapter: Story Text

excellent! just excellent! loved all the references, the anvil-sized hints and the "one of my most brilliant ideas".
I really enjoyed it, keep it up.
Also, the secret was hilariouse (in a good way)

Author's Response: Thanks -- I'm glad someone noticed the "one of my most brilliant ideas", I think you're the first person to comment on it!

Reviewer: sfc823
Date: 05/14/07 23:18
Chapter: Story Text

hahahahahahahaha.... i loved the harry and ron bit at the end... it made me chuckle... a lot......and i caught the anvil sized j.k. rowling reference... that was very clever...it made me laugh quite a bit......wonderfull story... i enjoyed reading it

:::hearts:::
sarah

Author's Response: Thank you very much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 05/13/07 22:50
Chapter: Story Text

this was amazing. i loved the suspense throughout the whole thing of what the secret was, and while i was intially surprised the secret wasn't as serious as they made it seem, i really like this story exactly as you wrote it.

Author's Response: Thank you -- I didn't want things to be too dark in this one, as it's a sort of comedy idea treated fairly 'straight'. :)

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 04/29/07 11:46
Chapter: Story Text

wat a story hermione being a seir i actually c thht happening n harry's"One of my more brilliant ideas," line nearly made me bite my fand off this is a gr8 story and i find its end very well thort out and wrien

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I couldn't resist that line of Harry's. :)

Reviewer: lucilla_pauie
Date: 01/13/07 2:02
Chapter: Story Text

i don't know why you got only a few reviews, maybe you left the readers speechless!
as for me, i fought the spell, and here i am telling you i adored this story.
although you made me bite my lips in impatience during the expositions in dialogues, this was well done and harry and ron's anxiety was well explained by hermione's reaction. it made me laugh. really. nice idea. i've always felt hermione is special. this story befits her. :)

Author's Response: Thanks -- yes, I'm afraid I do tend to let the characters drone on in dialogue. :( Glad you enjoyed it, anyway -- it was fun to give Hermione the one special power she really wouldn't have expected! :)

Reviewer: lucilla_pauie
Date: 01/13/07 2:02
Chapter: Story Text

i don't know why you got only a few reviews, maybe you left the readers speechless!
as for me, i fought the spell, and here i am telling you i adored this story.
although you made me bite my lips in impatience during the expositions in dialogues, this was well done and harry and ron's anxiety was well explained by hermione's reaction. it made me laugh. really. nice idea. i've always felt hermione is special.

Author's Response: See above.

Reviewer: pottersweasle722
Date: 12/25/06 21:14
Chapter: Story Text

If judging from poor, good, and great, I would say....good. here's why...only 2 things, don't worry...but i didn't really like the charctorization of a couple of people it just didn't seem like them, and how people kept calling Hermione 'love'. it kept reminding of capt. Jack, you know from Pirates...now don't get me wrong, I love POTC and definatly Capt. Jack, but it's just not an HP thing. Loved your idea though!!!
--love from--
pottersweasle722

Author's Response: Fair enough -- I've never actually watched POTC, so I didn't realise he said that. I imagine Ron would say it a bit differently. :) It's probably a regional thing. Thanks anyway though, and I'm glad you enjoyed it even with that!

Reviewer: harietta_potter
Date: 08/27/06 21:40
Chapter: Story Text

lol. That was one of the most interesting fan fics I have ever read


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 08/24/06 15:11
Chapter: Story Text

Ha! What a great story. Loved the "...umph!"'s by the way, very funny. ;)
Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: emily_porter
Date: 08/06/06 13:00
Chapter: Story Text

such a cute read great job !! i would have liked for the profecy to be a bit more important but still awesome job

Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't want to make it too portentous, but it's still important in the sense that it got Harry to accept help from his friends and allies, rather than go off doing the Lone Hero bit as he has a tendency to do.

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 07/20/06 6:36
Chapter: Story Text

Cute! Good idea, too. I loved the ongoing argument between Harry and Ron about telling Hermione. Very original one-shot. Good job! =) --RP

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Can't really blame them for not wanting to be the one to tell her. :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 07/19/06 19:47
Chapter: Story Text

its soooooooooo cute
i luv it


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/18/06 18:09
Chapter: Story Text

Cute, how Ron and Harry are so terrified of telling her. :) I liked that she took it so well, though, and I enjoyed seeing Luna. Also, the way Harry used what resources he had was quite clever. Loved "anvil-sized hints"!!

Author's Response: Thank you -- couldn't resist that phrase. :) It was fun to write Luna, and Harry having to learn to call on his resources is a pet theory of mine for Book 7 ...

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