Awww poor Lupin... did i read it write? cos it read like Greyback had raped Lupin, poor thing x
I thought it was very good, but It might've just been me, but I thought it was a bit hard to follow. Overall though, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive criticism! Some of the ideas are a bit abstract, I know. :)
I liked this. It was well written and I think you handled the more serious subject really well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
ohh this is kind of... haunting. very well written & good description!
Author's Response: Ooh, I like that word...haunting. Thank you so much!
I don't usually go into slash, elphin (okay, admittedly, I do venture over now and again to see what's up) and this one just caught my eye. First off, there's just something about that darn Greyback that makes me hate him and yet want to read more. Second, I love Remus. Third, I love Sirius. This story, therefore, worked very well for me :).
No honestly. It was extremely well written. Your use of symbolism with the fire and the blood - the whole Greyback room scene was great (not morbidly so, descriptive-wise..) VERY clever. very good. And the Sirius/Remus part. Again, I don't go into it much but you really got them even beyond "friends with benefits" or anything else. I mean, in that short scene, you knew exactly what their relationship was. It was perfect. They were lovers so far that they were beyond best friends. I don't know. I can't describe it. It was really really good. And the inclusion of the last character was a good move. I was thinking "oh I wonder if you-know-who'll come in. Probably not. Too bad." And then voila! I'm glad I ventured into this realm on this night (at 12:52 am...) and found this. Definite favorite list. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response: Wow...your review left me speechless, I'm so flattered. I'm sooooo glad you enjoyed it and it's really cool to get a review from somebody who doesn't normally read slash and still enjoys the pairing. Thank you so much! ^.^
Ohhh...I feel so bad for Remus. Although I find the Remus/Sirius relationship kind of strange, the emotions that go with it make sense. I also love how Tonks is there for him at the end. They are so right for each other! I wish this wasn't the only chapter! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. I wish I had the patience to write a longer story, lol. :)
