Reviews For A Sister's Lament
Reviewer: greeneyes
Date: 07/12/06 10:50
Chapter: One Shot

Ooooh, this is sooo good! I remember helping you out with your plot/character for Minnie on the fanfiction forums. This is very good. I like it. =]

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Thanks for the help, too. I'm almost done with the first chapter of my story^^

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 07/11/06 13:00
Chapter: One Shot

Very sad. Touching. Interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you ^^

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 07/11/06 12:42
Chapter: One Shot

Very sad. Touching. Interesting.

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 07/11/06 10:15
Chapter: One Shot

Very original concept that Harry had a sister. I truly love originality! I'v told many authors this, but it's true. I will refuse to read a story/poem that is not original. The second verse was my favorite, it just flowed so smoothly, as far as rhyming went. I also liked how she called him Harry James instead of Harry. I don't know why, but you hardly ever hear Harry James in poetry, and again, I love originality. I wonder, where did you get the idea for this? Was it just something that popped into your mind, or did you have to sit down and think for a while? I have two poems up, and I could never ryhme like you did.Of course, my fic, Sorrows More Peaceful, is my pride and joy, because of its originality, but still, my poems could be a lot better if I had a mind like yours! Sheesh! I should get tutoring from you! Great job!

Author's Response: Wow. I've never gotten such a positive review for any of my writing! Thanks! Rhyming isn't my cup of tea, so I'm glad you liked the flow. In reality, I have an obsession with middle names, and I think that 'Harry James' has a wonderful ring to it. The idea just popped into my head while I was watching Spongebob Squarepants, believe it or not. Thanks again for the great review ^.^

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