Reviews For Family Ties
Reviewer: woomama
Date: 07/17/06 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Helios and Extras

This is not my usual category, however, I was directed here and was glad that I was. You never tend to think about what is going on with some of the other more minor charaters. I can say that Seamus and his actions at this time period did make me wonder what had gone on. I am glad that someone is delving into the story. I like how you have fleshed out Dean a bit more and now Seamus coming into the picture. It is always fun to have a different perspective of what we know went on. I kind of wish you had put more of thought about the dog on the platform in there. To see what he thought of that. Was he the one who yelled to Harry "nice dog" or was that someone else?
Keep up the good work, I will look for Chapter 2.

Author's Response: It was Lee Jordan who called "Nice dog" to Harry - and we know who the dog is but Dean has no clue :)

Reviewer: Seventh_child
Date: 07/17/06 15:31
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Helios and Extras

Great to see this up, Anyanka. Dean's one of the more interesting Gryffindors, considering his back story. Good job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement Seventh :)

Reviewer: Accio_Brain
Date: 07/15/06 12:10
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Helios and Extras

I was so excited to see that this was up today! I love seeing things through Dean's eyes and I like that you've chosen a minor character as your protagonist. We know very little about Dean and it's interesting to see his point of view on things. Good work! : )

Author's Response: Thank you my wonderful beta reader :)

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