Reviews For Family Ties
Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 01/23/07 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Family Ties

i always thought that dean and lee could be somehow related.... i thought that was just me though...

Author's Response: Nope... I thought so too! :) Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 01/18/07 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Ordinary Wizarding Levels

i love it! and i love your perspective on where dumbledore was hiding the whole time!

Author's Response: Thanks... complete accident. I was determined that Dean would see the trial on the same night as the Ministry thing... then when it came to it I realised that Dumbledore was gone by then! Then I thought, hey, noone else was in the office and who would think to look there? Glad you're enjoying it, we're near the end now :)

Reviewer: mostly_harmless_66
Date: 01/07/07 13:13
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Magical Mischief Making

This story is brilliant! Excellently written; I really like your idea of Dean becoming a Healer.

Author's Response: Yes... I wrote myself into a plot hole with that, but I dug my way out for the sequel :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/07/07 10:45
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Magical Mischief Making

AMAZING! This was great, I loved the Fred and George part. Update soon please!

Author's Response: I will as soon as they let me :)

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/03/07 9:55
Chapter: Chapter 15 - The Raiding of the DA

I'm impressed - I don't usually like OftP fics, because I didn't like that book as much as the others, yet I can't stop reading this. The part about Dean's father is my favorite. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Believe it or not, OotP is my least favourite book too! I set FT alongside it because I needed the Room of Requirement, and I built the story from there :) I always submit the next chapter straight away, so you only have to wait til it's validated!

Reviewer: lupin is the chocolate man
Date: 01/03/07 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 15 - The Raiding of the DA

In short, I think this story is very well written. You have captured the characters' personalities very well. I especially like how you describe Ginny & Dean's relationship towards each other.

Author's Response: Thanks very much :) Ginny and Dean's relationship was one thing I was determined to bring into it - considering they're a couple throughout HBP... I'm glad you think I've done a good job! :D Thank you!!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/19/06 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Feeling too much

AHHH! Too short!! PMS!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/16/06 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Valentine's Slip-Ups

I couldn't... I just wanted the first review. But great chappie! I love this story!

Author's Response: Ah I see, well Chapter 13 is in the queue :)

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/03/06 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Valentine's Slip-Ups

First review here too :D

Author's Response: Wow... very enthusiastic new fan :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. If it helps, the story is completely written, it's just a matter of getting it validated. Check in regularly! And thanks for reading <3

Author's Response: Hang on... Chapter 12 says it isn't validated... so how can you see it?

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/03/06 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 11 - An Answer to the Problem

Hey, first review! I'm proud of myself. But please, I can't stand not knowing! (I'm soo impatient!)

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/03/06 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 11 - An Answer to the Problem

UGH!! Please please please please write more soon! As in, ASAP! ANd make it validate so fast - I HATE stories when I don't know what happens!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 12/02/06 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Escape from Azkaban

You have woven your story and canon very well, It makes me think that if JKR were to use this story it would be in the 5th book.

Author's Response: I think that's the nicest thing anyone ever said to me :) Thanks for reading, I love finding out what people think :)

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 12/02/06 16:12
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Escape from Azkaban

I've read this fic and i must say that it is really odd, not too many people write about second characters. Do u have a crush on Dean? hehehe just kidding.
I think you're doing a really pretty work with this. I like how you write and describe the situations...and I also can't wait for read some Dean/Ginny action in the next year!!!
Keep this up!!!!!

Author's Response: No I don't have a crush on Dean >_< I just thought JKR had a great story idea there, and decided to write it myself since she won't have time to now. This fic spans the same year as OotP... so I'm afraid no Dean/Ginny action in the next year! I have written a sequel, called Not Alone which is set the year after HBP. Keep your eyes open for it when Family Ties finishes :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 10/31/06 7:15
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary

Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've just read yours too!

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 10/26/06 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 7 – Dream Shock

Pretty good story so far! I like how you've used an idea of JKR's and made it your own - all we knew previously was that Dean's biological father was a wizard. It's also great the way you gave us bit's of Gary's character through the various files - you really get to know him! Keep up the good work!
~Tickled Pink~
Just one thing - what happened to the one month needed for his report to McGonagall?

Author's Response: Thanks very much for your review :D in response to your question - Dean got so into the report he finished it early :) He handed it in long before he even found the Room of Requirement - he only did that out of curiousity because he was drawn to Gary.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 10/26/06 16:49
Chapter: Chapter 3 - The Matter of Ginny Weasley

Interesting topic. good perspective from Dean's POV.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Keep reading and let me know what you think as it pans out :)

Reviewer: nire135
Date: 09/24/06 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 6 – Healer School Drop-out

he's getting closer and closer.

Author's Response: Yes... won't be long now... stick with it and keep reviewing :D

Author's Response: BTW, thanks for reading and reviewing ;)

Reviewer: Trozzle
Date: 08/02/06 7:05
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary

That is a good story-It is very interesting to read Order of the pheniox from Dean's point of veiw.Is he related to Jack Webster the death eater?

Author's Response: It's not Jack he feels the connection to - it's to the Auror he killed, Gary Heaton. Glad you're enjoying it, I'm actually finished this story, and I'm getting it up here as fast as I can!

Reviewer: Velvet Tears
Date: 07/31/06 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary

Need more, need more! That's so cool!

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm still waiting on Chapter 2 being vailidated. The story will pick up I guarrantee it. :D It's finished, its just getting it all posted, waiting for it to be validated :)

Reviewer: slimemonster
Date: 07/31/06 5:48
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary

looking good but it think its got to improve.....

Author's Response: It will, you've only seen the first chapter! Give it time :)

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