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Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 10/29/11 14:07 · For: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary
I'm liking it. Hopefully though it's not as transparent as it seems (no offense). Is Dean the long lost son of Jack Webster. Then again, I may have read your story before. Whatever. I like it.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 10/29/11 13:58 · For: Chapter 1 - Helios and Extras
Great start. Glad I found this story.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 12:00 · For: Chapter 21 - Facing up to Summer
Nice one. I think the editor missed the very first sentence. I would think the letter should be addressed to Mrs joran not Mrs heaton as Jordan is her married name. Otherwise, great chapter.

Author's Response: Ooops - that was a bit stupid! Thanks for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed it as I'm not that fond of this one myself any more - but I have to post it because I wrote a sequel, which wouldn't make sense if you haven't read this one! Please look it up - it's called Not Alone :)

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 11:45 · For: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders
Interesting chapter. Can't wait to see what's next.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 11:08 · For: Chapter 17 - Ginny Nightingale
Great chapter except I can't really picture any Death Eater kicking and punching someone. Not with all the Dark Magic they know.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 10:14 · For: Chapter 13 - Feeling too much
Great chapter. I like the idea of this particular mirror. Kind of like the MOE. Nicely done.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 9:40 · For: Chapter 8 - Everything he knew...
Nice chapter. I have always liked Dean. Finding out about him is very interesting.

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 03/13/11 7:01 · For: Chapter 6 Healer School Drop-out
Story started out slow but is heating up now. I like it. Sometimes the writing seems a little choppy but as I said, I am really starting to like the storyline.

Name: ladiibug (Signed) · Date: 06/20/07 0:51 · For: Chapter 21 - Facing up to Summer
your story was written amazingly well. It was great that you decided to do it from someone else's point of view, and not someone "run of the mill" like Ginny or Neville or someone. Dean was kind of out of the loop, but telling this story shows that he might not have been? i wish it was a book lol

Author's Response: That means a lot considering that I'm not fond of this story anymore! Do please check out the sequel - of which there are 7 chapters of up now - Not Alone :)

Name: fightingokra4life (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 15:40 · For: Chapter 21 - Facing up to Summer
very nice!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, keep a lookout for the sequel: Not Alone, which is much better than this :)

Name: LiaWitch20 (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 19:01 · For: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders
I really like this fic. I completely love Dean, He is very nice. And there's a problem with it, how am i going to keep loving Ginny when she ditchs him?
Awesome work, by the way

Author's Response: If it helps, I haven't written that... Family Ties only goes up to the end of Fifth year and Not Alone is set alongside Deathly Hallows

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 17:30 · For: Chapter 17 - Ginny Nightingale
Good way to get Dean interested in Quidditch.

Author's Response: I needed some way... he didn't try out in 5th year...

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 17:24 · For: Chapter 16 - Magical Mischief Making
Funny how already Dean is jealous of Harry and he isn't yet dating Ginny.

Author's Response: My Dean has a jealous streak a mile wide - that's kinda what splits them in the end according to canon!

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 17:11 · For: Chapter 14 - Interviews and Insensitivity
I like the inclusion of the other things that happen in book 5 seem from Dean's POV.

Author's Response: Yeah, canon can be a blessing and a curse though!

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 17:06 · For: Chapter 13 - Feeling too much
Amusing chapter. especially the feeling of attraction for his mom.

Author's Response: I know!.. weird isn't it?

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 17:00 · For: Chapter 11 - An Answer to the Problem
Ironic isn't it. It looks as though Dean owes Voldemort one.

Author's Response: In a twisted way kinda... Thanks for the feedback :)

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 15:28 · For: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders
Wowzaz! This is amazing, I love it. It's so cool seeing a different perspective, but at the same time it has new twists that follow Dean.
Can't wait for the next chapter and the epilogue! You'll let us know when the sequel is up, right?

Author's Response: of course :) It's called Not Alone so keep an eye out for it! If you favourite me as an author you'll probably get an email about it...

Name: Arial Felchem (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 9:06 · For: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders
Just wanted to add that my favorite part about your story is seeing Harry, Ron and Hermione from a different perspective. It's so interesting to see what the other students think of them and to kind of watch them from a distance. Great story!

Author's Response: That's the interesting thing is figuring out how they appear to everyone else :) Thanks hon :)

Name: Arial Felchem (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 9:01 · For: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders
I love this story! It's so interesting to have a different perspective...please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I will update soon my dear readers, there's one more chapter then the epilogue... and then the sequel :)

Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 01/23/07 16:45 · For: Chapter 19 - Family Ties
Wow, Lee and Dean are cousins! Never saw that coming... but the Patronus (a bat?) who was it and what was it about? Wait! It's Harry in the DoM, and the bat must be... Siruis(?)

Author's Response: Thanks Abbs! Yeah, they're cousins, my final little twist :) I assumed people would know who and what the Patronus was... it WAS a bat... can you think of noone who would have a bat Patronus? *coughSnapecough*

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